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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/06/12

Words

The words, inside, deep, swallow, taste, need etc. give it an erotic tinge, but the need seems much more emotional than physical. Well done.

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by Maria239403/06/12

wicked good!

You show an intimate use of off rhyme, which is a talent in itself and the content is strong and mind blowing. Loved this poem! Good work!!

~ maria

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by tazz31703/06/12

TRY TILL YOU SUCCEED

or fake it till u make it. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Imagetaker11/16/12

Strong Image

"I want to taste your soul" is a powerful hook.

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