All Comments on 'Cousin's First Time'

this is an EROTICA site not a PORN site. this was just trashy porn and not well written at that plus it was way to short it should be three times longer. this needs a lot more background and character development and detail plus an end as is it is only a first draft that never should have been posted.

Extremely well written. I cannot express my arousal reading this story. It's rare for me to enjoy a story these days without grammatical errors ruining it. Thankyou for a fantastically written story! Keep it up!

I agree with Anon 11/12/14. Well written, very hot, & best of all grammar & spelling were done properly. I look forward to more of your writing, but one request, Longer Stories Please!!!

this would be really good with a few more chapters

Great story. Yes, chapter 2 please!

too short and no compelling buildup

A blow job story? MEH!