potential of a great writer to emerge, please continue a few more chapters, a love story of old and young would be very inspirational! And a very best of luck to you
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Anonymous09/28/14
Loved it!
I have to say, this was one weird ass story.. hahaha.. I don't generally like mature stories where either of the participants are elderly, but I am so happy I kept reading this one, as the meeting outside of the library was colorful and beautifully written. I think what made it weird was not knowing where it was going in the earlier portion with all the public phallus displays and what not, but again, I loved it. A great mix of perversion, and tenderness. Thanks for the submission.
English
good story
keep writing very erotic and sexy
A very erotic touch!
potential of a great writer to emerge, please continue a few more chapters, a love story of old and young would be very inspirational! And a very best of luck to you
Loved it!
I have to say, this was one weird ass story.. hahaha.. I don't generally like mature stories where either of the participants are elderly, but I am so happy I kept reading this one, as the meeting outside of the library was colorful and beautifully written. I think what made it weird was not knowing where it was going in the earlier portion with all the public phallus displays and what not, but again, I loved it. A great mix of perversion, and tenderness. Thanks for the submission.
A story that draws you in!
Very realistic - great stuff!
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