Wish this would happen to my girlfriend. Very strong first effort. Hope to see more from you in the future. Ignore the negativity. You have talent.
by
Anonymous03/11/12
Great Story
This is hot...very graphic, very clear and very exciting. As to those who purport to hate guys who share their women...find another category. If you really dislike it, don't read it. Being a voyeur and sharing his girl does not make him gay. Insulting a writer doesn't make you masculine.
This story is very, very hot. Hope to have more from this writer. I have given it the very uncommon 5 stars... Great!
usual crap. another cuck getting off on girlfriend watching. so, what's new?
by
Anonymous03/11/12
please continue this story
very very hot. great pacing and just the right amount of detail. can't wait for another chapter
by
Anonymous03/11/12
bible bashers out again?
well written. hope to read more
by
Anonymous03/11/12
Horniest story!
This story made me hard immediately. Great details about watching his loving woman acting like a slut. Very believable because she didn't jump straight into it, the stranger came on to her. I don't think it's gay - this story is more about watching his nice girlfriend sharing her pussy. I think she was encouraged by her man because he didn't stop the stranger when they were dancing. He wanted to see her experience another man and she was curious. It doesn't make him a cuckold - as someone else pointed out the strangers cock was no bigger and he wasn't obsessed with being humiliated like most cucks. I think it's more about voyeurism and eroticism. The unprotect sex made it even hotter Thanks!
by
Anonymous03/11/12
Can and can't.
Those who can do and those who can't, watch.
by
Anonymous03/11/12
Hope she gets pregnant
More stories like this please. Sooner or later this slut must get pregnant with a child that is not her husband's. Excellent.
left the possibility of a Chapter Two. Upon reflection this is a sad story with her future of bareback strangers and drunkenness and his future of watching her degrading both herself and him. We readers just got to see the opening scenes of their trip to the gutter.
by
Anonymous04/22/12
Excellent
Well written and maintained the intensity, the heat. Love girlfriends that lose control
by
Anonymous06/23/12
Breaks off too sudden
thus losing quite a bit. The end should have been extended with something as a "showdown" perhaps? (Please don´t end it as a sanctuary for wimps)..
Nevertheless: Well written
by
Anonymous07/13/12
Nice!
Hot story! Nicely written and full of passion.
by
Anonymous10/07/12
I would have kickedher out of bed
Divorce i wouldnt sleep or be in same room for the slut drinking is no excuse for cheating Absolutely none
by
Anonymous10/18/12
slut
i wouldnt sleep with her again but well written.
I would have packed up and left if she fucked someone that easy from drinking you wouldnt want to be married to her and expect her to be faithful cause it wouldnt happen.
by
Anonymous10/20/12
Loved it.
Fantasize about a hot young stud picking up my wife and fucking her all the time. I think you captured the feelings of angst and arousal well. Thanks!
In the absence of judgment thus story was on the extreme of hit and erotic. The girl was quite hot questioning her boyfriend for approval knowingly receiving his unspoken consent she acted out on her lust. Her boyfriend yearned to be a cuckold and that he got. If this were not his wish or fantasy the judgment of this situation rears its head. Having flirty fun can be an enjoyable aphrodisiac that more daring couples might engage themselves. There are anomalies that warrant examination if that is an issue for the reader. The fact that the boyfriend allowed this stud to grind very closely at his girlfriend was the moment I felt this story descending toward a cuckold arrangement. A traditional boyfriend would've gently protested at first with the touching beginning on the very first wave of touching by the stud on the dance floor. The story would've concluded. If the stud persisted them approach in the protestations would've escalated in-kind. This was the tipping point to this story. Whether the author had the intent or not, this was the behavior of a cuckold and hot girlfriend relationship which may have branched out to swinging by the feel of the story. If for some crazy reason this boyfriend didn't want this stud to have his way with his girlfriend then it is completely illogical. I don't have the author's privileges in moldings the characters and events so I can't change the story but I do possess my feelings and my culture and my comfort zones on the nature of my own relations. With that in mind I have frustration about the lines crossed by the couple and my reaction to them. Not my cup of tea, but very erotic.
by
Anonymous05/20/13
It's time!
To find a new girlfriend because this one is a total slut. The good news? You aren't married so it costs you nothing to kick her to the curb!
by
Anonymous06/15/13
Loved It
What a great story. You had me hard and stroking myself until I shot cum everywhere.
More stories please.
Mke
How was he supposed to "find a new girlfriend"? After all, don´t women usually prefer men? No man would behave that way. Well, as they say: Show me the story and I´ll tell you about the author...
If she was my girl friend I would have yelled down the alley to them (before she had her orgasm) "don't come back to the room tonight slut!" Then both of their nights would have been ruined, not just his.
Good thing he found out she is a slut before he married her. Well written, although, I would have liked for him to take some kind of stand, not just act like it never happened. Maybe you can recover his manhood by writing a part two and giving him some balls!
Though I'm not an author just my opinion.
by
Anonymous12/21/13
awesome
I would of had her suck my cock while he fucked her then took turns fucking her. That story was hott
by
Anonymous01/17/14
Drunken Dance
Had me so aroused. A great story
by
Anonymous01/24/14
I ejaculated when my gorgeous girlfriend flashed her puss
Last week Saturday, I met my gorgeous girlfriend for lunch at a local outdoor restaurant. I felt jealous and akwardly possesive when I first saw her because she wore a summer-dress which was higher than her knees. We ordered our meals, and I saw a local taxi parked next to our table with two black teenage boys staring at my girlfriend in the direction under the table where she sat. I made sure her legs were crossed. We walked to look at a painting gallery next to the restaurant. I saw the black boys stare at my girlfriends legs and lick their lips. One said, "Her legs are so thick and wide apart, I want to pull her panty down and suck her puss". I watched as we returned to our table. I walked a distance behind my girlfriend. I noticed one of the boys flash his penis at my girlfriend, and my girlfriend intentionally look. When we sat at our table, I saw that boy masturbate while purposely exposing his penis to my girlfriend. I ejaculated, because I noticed my girlfriend spread her legs and flash her panty at the boy. I left her behind after we argued. I returned 20 minutes later and ejaculated again non-stop when I discovered she was inside the taxi, and that same boy was fucking her puss without a condom, and the other boy was fucking her arsehole without a condom. I saw them ejaculate inside her puss and arsehole. It disgusted me, but I ejaculated again after seeing the boys sperm drip from her puss.
by
Anonymous05/26/14
drunken dance
I DANCE MANY TIMES IN CLUB AND IN MY ROOM WHEN PARTY IS GOING ON
MY LOVER WANT ME TO SEE IN NUDE DANCE I DO IT THEY FUCK ME IN DANCING MODE IF U WANT TO HEAR MORE PLESAE E MAIL ME
dolla_tata1@rediffmail.com
by mrs kundan g parakh
The odds of this could staying together "Till Death Do Us Part" is one in a million.
by
Anonymous06/20/14
great wife
My wife did something similar but when she came home she walked up to me laying in bed and put her pussy up to my face so I licked er pussy. We both got turned on as I sucked cum from her pussy and she said she would be doing this alot more. I cant wait.
by
Anonymous06/21/14
enjoyed it!
Because this is something my wife and I do since our kids grew up and moved away from home. We have a friend who we asked to stop by and she took him by the hand and led him to our bedroom, closing and locking the door behind. After about 30 minutes she called me in and asked me to lick her cunt. It was awkward, with our friend sitting there in her makeup chair, fully clothed.
I stuck my tongue on her and found it completely full. They both saw how much I enjoyed cleaning her out and when I looked around, I notice his cock was out, standing as hard as a rock and straight up as a flagpole. I walked over, reached down and started jacking his cock, wondering if he'd be uncomfortable with it. Nope! He sure wasn't and I continued until his hips were pumping hard. I looked over and saw my wife still laying on the bed, on her side watching with her fingers in a blur over her clit. It was obvious he was about to cum and I shocked all three of us.
When he was a millisecond from shooting all that yummy sperm out, I dipped my head down and wrapped my warm and wet mouth around the head of his cock and continued to jack. He didn't have a chance and started shooting into my mouth. I stayed with him as he filled my mouth and slowly worked him down after getting 8 shots into my mouth and on my tastebuds. Delicious! Afterward, I was able to get him up and had the honor of guiding his cock into my wife's leaking cunt and watching him fill it again. And I was invited to clean it out.
Now, some 5 years later, our friend either stops by or we call him. He comes over and if my wife isn't there, I suck him to completion two or three times while I jack myself. I've found nothing more exciting in my life than having the opportunity to jack and cum while my mouth is full of cock. The orgasms are world altering. And if he starts to cum when I am cumming, words can't explain the feeling.
Really, I don't remember the last time I fucked my wife, our friend has taken up the slack. I have severe ED and this way my wife is able to get her need of hard cock filled, I get to clean her pussy out, something I really enjoy. Plus I enjoy putting his cock to her pussy, rub it up and down her slot to wet it, then let him go to work! Cleaning his cock is something I enjoy also, though I would rather have had it shoot into my mouth.
My wife and our friend understand the terrible time I have in orgasming with a soft cock and help me out as much as I need. My wife will stand behind me and run a small dildo in and out of my ass while I jack my cock. While we do that, even if our friend is soft, he allows me to suck on it while I do my best to earn his load to swallow and that alone lets me orgasm from my soft penis.
I delight to think of the empty meaningless life you'll have, devoid of any love for anything other than yourself.
by
Anonymous08/23/14
your sexy girlfreind
your going to watch this sexy lady dance one day with a older black man hes going to get into her knickers fuck her bareback the only difference will be he will cum back time and time again visiting her till her tight little vagina is no more and your girlfreind is black pregnant with a swollen belly
by
Anonymous09/30/14
slut wives are the best
love it when my slut wife gets fucked then comes home drunk and has me lick her clean, now she wants to watch me suck several cocks, I cant wait O
by
Anonymous11/07/14
He couldn't wait?
I guess that's because it didn't make any difference. First of all, wrong category. No wives in this mess. And the reason it didn't make any difference is because she's only the GIRLFRIEND! So dumping the cheating slut costs him nothing. Just wave bye bye on your way out honey and don't let the door hit your ass on the way out. With unlikeable characters and terrible dialogue there was simply nothing to like about this sorry tale.
by
Anonymous11/19/14
Great drunken dance story
I hope you write more! great story, very hot
by
Anonymous01/12/15
Loser
Think of all those lovely diseases squirted up into her slaggy drunken hole.
Gonorrhea syphilis herpes aids - all can make her a blind diseased hag within months of this encounter & also as she will obviously shag anything with a pulse can you imagine the mayhem she could create with decent married men going home to their lovely childhood sweetheart wives & lovely young children. Nice story LOSER !
by
Anonymous01/12/15
dear annony you dumbass fag, There's no std or aids becasue it's a sex story
on a sex site on the fucking internet. I gave it a 5 to make sure your brain dead dumb ass vote is canceled out!!
So sad he watches his girlfriend cheat and does nothing...but I can understand, if she will always be a girlfrien, an easy fuck to him. And when the time to marry arrives, he can choose a woman with morals and leaves the cheater for her to find a cully to marry her...
...another english cuckold-worshipper! Anyway - I did learn something, though: As soon as I find the prefix (or suffix, for all it matters) "english" in a name I rush to get rid of any temptation of reading his story. "English" inevitably destroys a fine steak or a written story.
English
Loved it
Wish this would happen to my girlfriend. Very strong first effort. Hope to see more from you in the future. Ignore the negativity. You have talent.
Great Story
This is hot...very graphic, very clear and very exciting. As to those who purport to hate guys who share their women...find another category. If you really dislike it, don't read it. Being a voyeur and sharing his girl does not make him gay. Insulting a writer doesn't make you masculine.
This story is very, very hot. Hope to have more from this writer. I have given it the very uncommon 5 stars... Great!
A drunken dance
loved the story keep up the good work
fucking crap
usual crap. another cuck getting off on girlfriend watching. so, what's new?
please continue this story
very very hot. great pacing and just the right amount of detail. can't wait for another chapter
bible bashers out again?
well written. hope to read more
Horniest story!
This story made me hard immediately. Great details about watching his loving woman acting like a slut. Very believable because she didn't jump straight into it, the stranger came on to her. I don't think it's gay - this story is more about watching his nice girlfriend sharing her pussy. I think she was encouraged by her man because he didn't stop the stranger when they were dancing. He wanted to see her experience another man and she was curious. It doesn't make him a cuckold - as someone else pointed out the strangers cock was no bigger and he wasn't obsessed with being humiliated like most cucks. I think it's more about voyeurism and eroticism. The unprotect sex made it even hotter Thanks!
Can and can't.
Those who can do and those who can't, watch.
Hope she gets pregnant
More stories like this please. Sooner or later this slut must get pregnant with a child that is not her husband's. Excellent.
Hot story
Really liked this. Your lady sounds fun
Open ended finish
left the possibility of a Chapter Two. Upon reflection this is a sad story with her future of bareback strangers and drunkenness and his future of watching her degrading both herself and him. We readers just got to see the opening scenes of their trip to the gutter.
Excellent
Well written and maintained the intensity, the heat. Love girlfriends that lose control
Breaks off too sudden
thus losing quite a bit. The end should have been extended with something as a "showdown" perhaps? (Please don´t end it as a sanctuary for wimps)..
Nevertheless: Well written
Nice!
Hot story! Nicely written and full of passion.
I would have kickedher out of bed
Divorce i wouldnt sleep or be in same room for the slut drinking is no excuse for cheating Absolutely none
slut
i wouldnt sleep with her again but well written.
I would have packed up and left if she fucked someone that easy from drinking you wouldnt want to be married to her and expect her to be faithful cause it wouldnt happen.
Loved it.
Fantasize about a hot young stud picking up my wife and fucking her all the time. I think you captured the feelings of angst and arousal well. Thanks!
Awesome
Really loved the reality of it. His slutty girlfriend and the scenario was spot on. Great story!!
Enjoyable & Believeable
Enjoyable read, not totally unrealistic & nice length. Good Job
Very erotic hot story
In the absence of judgment thus story was on the extreme of hit and erotic. The girl was quite hot questioning her boyfriend for approval knowingly receiving his unspoken consent she acted out on her lust. Her boyfriend yearned to be a cuckold and that he got. If this were not his wish or fantasy the judgment of this situation rears its head. Having flirty fun can be an enjoyable aphrodisiac that more daring couples might engage themselves. There are anomalies that warrant examination if that is an issue for the reader. The fact that the boyfriend allowed this stud to grind very closely at his girlfriend was the moment I felt this story descending toward a cuckold arrangement. A traditional boyfriend would've gently protested at first with the touching beginning on the very first wave of touching by the stud on the dance floor. The story would've concluded. If the stud persisted them approach in the protestations would've escalated in-kind. This was the tipping point to this story. Whether the author had the intent or not, this was the behavior of a cuckold and hot girlfriend relationship which may have branched out to swinging by the feel of the story. If for some crazy reason this boyfriend didn't want this stud to have his way with his girlfriend then it is completely illogical. I don't have the author's privileges in moldings the characters and events so I can't change the story but I do possess my feelings and my culture and my comfort zones on the nature of my own relations. With that in mind I have frustration about the lines crossed by the couple and my reaction to them. Not my cup of tea, but very erotic.
It's time!
To find a new girlfriend because this one is a total slut. The good news? You aren't married so it costs you nothing to kick her to the curb!
Loved It
What a great story. You had me hard and stroking myself until I shot cum everywhere.
More stories please.
Mke
So what?
How was he supposed to "find a new girlfriend"? After all, don´t women usually prefer men? No man would behave that way. Well, as they say: Show me the story and I´ll tell you about the author...
Come on!
If she was my girl friend I would have yelled down the alley to them (before she had her orgasm) "don't come back to the room tonight slut!" Then both of their nights would have been ruined, not just his.
Good thing he found out she is a slut before he married her. Well written, although, I would have liked for him to take some kind of stand, not just act like it never happened. Maybe you can recover his manhood by writing a part two and giving him some balls!
Though I'm not an author just my opinion.
awesome
I would of had her suck my cock while he fucked her then took turns fucking her. That story was hott
Drunken Dance
Had me so aroused. A great story
I ejaculated when my gorgeous girlfriend flashed her puss
Last week Saturday, I met my gorgeous girlfriend for lunch at a local outdoor restaurant. I felt jealous and akwardly possesive when I first saw her because she wore a summer-dress which was higher than her knees. We ordered our meals, and I saw a local taxi parked next to our table with two black teenage boys staring at my girlfriend in the direction under the table where she sat. I made sure her legs were crossed. We walked to look at a painting gallery next to the restaurant. I saw the black boys stare at my girlfriends legs and lick their lips. One said, "Her legs are so thick and wide apart, I want to pull her panty down and suck her puss". I watched as we returned to our table. I walked a distance behind my girlfriend. I noticed one of the boys flash his penis at my girlfriend, and my girlfriend intentionally look. When we sat at our table, I saw that boy masturbate while purposely exposing his penis to my girlfriend. I ejaculated, because I noticed my girlfriend spread her legs and flash her panty at the boy. I left her behind after we argued. I returned 20 minutes later and ejaculated again non-stop when I discovered she was inside the taxi, and that same boy was fucking her puss without a condom, and the other boy was fucking her arsehole without a condom. I saw them ejaculate inside her puss and arsehole. It disgusted me, but I ejaculated again after seeing the boys sperm drip from her puss.
drunken dance
I DANCE MANY TIMES IN CLUB AND IN MY ROOM WHEN PARTY IS GOING ON
MY LOVER WANT ME TO SEE IN NUDE DANCE I DO IT THEY FUCK ME IN DANCING MODE IF U WANT TO HEAR MORE PLESAE E MAIL ME
dolla_tata1@rediffmail.com
by mrs kundan g parakh
Odds
The odds of this could staying together "Till Death Do Us Part" is one in a million.
great wife
My wife did something similar but when she came home she walked up to me laying in bed and put her pussy up to my face so I licked er pussy. We both got turned on as I sucked cum from her pussy and she said she would be doing this alot more. I cant wait.
enjoyed it!
Because this is something my wife and I do since our kids grew up and moved away from home. We have a friend who we asked to stop by and she took him by the hand and led him to our bedroom, closing and locking the door behind. After about 30 minutes she called me in and asked me to lick her cunt. It was awkward, with our friend sitting there in her makeup chair, fully clothed.
I stuck my tongue on her and found it completely full. They both saw how much I enjoyed cleaning her out and when I looked around, I notice his cock was out, standing as hard as a rock and straight up as a flagpole. I walked over, reached down and started jacking his cock, wondering if he'd be uncomfortable with it. Nope! He sure wasn't and I continued until his hips were pumping hard. I looked over and saw my wife still laying on the bed, on her side watching with her fingers in a blur over her clit. It was obvious he was about to cum and I shocked all three of us.
When he was a millisecond from shooting all that yummy sperm out, I dipped my head down and wrapped my warm and wet mouth around the head of his cock and continued to jack. He didn't have a chance and started shooting into my mouth. I stayed with him as he filled my mouth and slowly worked him down after getting 8 shots into my mouth and on my tastebuds. Delicious! Afterward, I was able to get him up and had the honor of guiding his cock into my wife's leaking cunt and watching him fill it again. And I was invited to clean it out.
Now, some 5 years later, our friend either stops by or we call him. He comes over and if my wife isn't there, I suck him to completion two or three times while I jack myself. I've found nothing more exciting in my life than having the opportunity to jack and cum while my mouth is full of cock. The orgasms are world altering. And if he starts to cum when I am cumming, words can't explain the feeling.
Really, I don't remember the last time I fucked my wife, our friend has taken up the slack. I have severe ED and this way my wife is able to get her need of hard cock filled, I get to clean her pussy out, something I really enjoy. Plus I enjoy putting his cock to her pussy, rub it up and down her slot to wet it, then let him go to work! Cleaning his cock is something I enjoy also, though I would rather have had it shoot into my mouth.
My wife and our friend understand the terrible time I have in orgasming with a soft cock and help me out as much as I need. My wife will stand behind me and run a small dildo in and out of my ass while I jack my cock. While we do that, even if our friend is soft, he allows me to suck on it while I do my best to earn his load to swallow and that alone lets me orgasm from my soft penis.
Great talent!
Too bad, no new stories in years. You show great skill and your talented eye for erotica is perfect for the genre! Thank you!
You're one sick fuck!
I delight to think of the empty meaningless life you'll have, devoid of any love for anything other than yourself.
your sexy girlfreind
your going to watch this sexy lady dance one day with a older black man hes going to get into her knickers fuck her bareback the only difference will be he will cum back time and time again visiting her till her tight little vagina is no more and your girlfreind is black pregnant with a swollen belly
slut wives are the best
love it when my slut wife gets fucked then comes home drunk and has me lick her clean, now she wants to watch me suck several cocks, I cant wait O
He couldn't wait?
I guess that's because it didn't make any difference. First of all, wrong category. No wives in this mess. And the reason it didn't make any difference is because she's only the GIRLFRIEND! So dumping the cheating slut costs him nothing. Just wave bye bye on your way out honey and don't let the door hit your ass on the way out. With unlikeable characters and terrible dialogue there was simply nothing to like about this sorry tale.
Great drunken dance story
I hope you write more! great story, very hot
Loser
Think of all those lovely diseases squirted up into her slaggy drunken hole.
Gonorrhea syphilis herpes aids - all can make her a blind diseased hag within months of this encounter & also as she will obviously shag anything with a pulse can you imagine the mayhem she could create with decent married men going home to their lovely childhood sweetheart wives & lovely young children. Nice story LOSER !
dear annony you dumbass fag, There's no std or aids becasue it's a sex story
on a sex site on the fucking internet. I gave it a 5 to make sure your brain dead dumb ass vote is canceled out!!
I don't get the brits at all...
not at all
So sad...but...
So sad he watches his girlfriend cheat and does nothing...but I can understand, if she will always be a girlfrien, an easy fuck to him. And when the time to marry arrives, he can choose a woman with morals and leaves the cheater for her to find a cully to marry her...
Great story well-written
Good going :)
Just what we needed...
...another english cuckold-worshipper! Anyway - I did learn something, though: As soon as I find the prefix (or suffix, for all it matters) "english" in a name I rush to get rid of any temptation of reading his story. "English" inevitably destroys a fine steak or a written story.
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