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The Warrior's Heart Ch. 04

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by Dry_opinion03/10/12

A bit too simple

The chapters are short and the plot evolves around only two characters, so it's too simple, compared to other best stories. I just wanted to clarify that I give 5 stars as an encouragement to the author for her first story.
The plot is excellent, full of love, passion, good nature, logic and action. Brining more characters and pages to the story will definitely make it one of the best.
Thank you for your inspiration.

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by donalde03/10/12

excellent

your story keeps getting better each chapter looking for ward to the next chapter

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by bierce03/10/12

Nicely done

Great story line. Really enjoyable. Please continue.

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