All Comments on 'God Bless Yoga'

by qualitywheat

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 12 years ago
Mixed feelings

I love your incest stuff, but this started off in a non-con way. Not saying I don't like that either, but it was a little too reluctant on her part for me to totally enjoy.

Hope I'M not being too harsh.

I do enjoy many of your stories, and I did enjoy this one. Just the first part that caused me problems.

qualitywheatqualitywheatabout 12 years agoAuthor
Mixed feelings.

You are right about the non con element, I never saw that really, Justine was already aware of him etc. And sort of gave in to her emotions. Thank you for your kind comments, Rex

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Well I managed to make myself read to the end of the first page. There is just something really strange about the writing, like english isn't natural to the author. It was highly annoying having to read that far before being clued in to who the hell the guy was!

So she knows he's always wanted her. Great. Deep down she's wanted him. Great. Doesn't really change the fact that he raped her. Yeah, yeah, I get it. Still...

The writing style, or whatever it is, just really threw me off though as well...

Skipping to the last paragraph or two, looks like things got complicated anyway, lol. No score since I didnt finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A discription of the threesome would have been a good ending. Good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It wasn't non-conventional it was straight rape when she said no and he didn't stop it became rape period

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a load of nonsense. Have you ever even seen someone do yoga?

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