All Comments on 'Cristina & Sophie - Intimately'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
How Cute

A delightful tale - her innocence, their passion, the surprise of the lover's surreptitious "watching," very sweet! Thank you.

writedoctorwritedoctorabout 12 years ago
Nicely written

Excellent tale and loved the flow, characters. Wonderful mixture of erotic passion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for capturing my fantasy so beautifully and completely. I almost felt I was there <giggle>

-Sophie-

allyliterallyallyliterallyabout 12 years ago
Were you there?

I feel like I was the watcher, being watched by you. Beautifully done, Vixen, more power to your pen. I am await your next submission.

Oops, I meant submissions <wink>

Impatient-ally

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
beautiful

that is what passion and lust combined look like....absolutely mesmerising

AngelusQCAngelusQCover 10 years ago
Cute!

Sophie's shyness is so cute. Great mix of passion and light eroticism.

SharonsGirlSharonsGirlover 10 years ago
Not Bad

Cute story, liked "Booty and the Feast" better.

Still better than most on this site.

rover5520rover5520about 10 years ago
Lovely little tale.

Hello,

Thank you so much for this wonderful little story-you have such a deliciously sexy mind and a very beautiful style of writing!

Love,

Lindsay.

MadamSoMadamSoabout 10 years ago
So sweet!

As much as I love the kinky, raunchy, super heated sex addict stuff, this is fantastic! It is incredible to find such a sweet sexy-yet-soft lesbian erotic story. Keep up the good writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's okay but convoluted for such a small story. Of course it can just be me lacking comprehension skills but this is my honest assessment.

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