by AVixenLiterally
A delightful tale - her innocence, their passion, the surprise of the lover's surreptitious "watching," very sweet! Thank you.
Excellent tale and loved the flow, characters. Wonderful mixture of erotic passion.
Thank you for capturing my fantasy so beautifully and completely. I almost felt I was there <giggle>
-Sophie-
I feel like I was the watcher, being watched by you. Beautifully done, Vixen, more power to your pen. I am await your next submission.
Oops, I meant submissions <wink>
Impatient-ally
that is what passion and lust combined look like....absolutely mesmerising
Sophie's shyness is so cute. Great mix of passion and light eroticism.
Cute story, liked "Booty and the Feast" better.
Still better than most on this site.
Hello,
Thank you so much for this wonderful little story-you have such a deliciously sexy mind and a very beautiful style of writing!
Love,
Lindsay.
As much as I love the kinky, raunchy, super heated sex addict stuff, this is fantastic! It is incredible to find such a sweet sexy-yet-soft lesbian erotic story. Keep up the good writing!
It's okay but convoluted for such a small story. Of course it can just be me lacking comprehension skills but this is my honest assessment.