Mark, It's Your Mother... I'm Naked

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Great start...can't wait for the next part.

Ahhhhhhh!

I wasn't ready for the story to stop.... thanks for a great story and I'm looking forward to more chapters. Very well done.

Great start

looking forword to more!!!!!!!!!

A great start!!

Pixxie that was a great start. I hope you'll keep it going. I was placing myself in Marks place.

Nice story line

I found it odd that the boy/man was going into puberty at age 18 which is the average age of a senior in high school. Mark knew his mother was headed toward an orgasm with no experience. These things are minor, but influenced how I read the story. For a first time presenting a written story; you did well. By all means write more and examine your believable index.
RS

marks mother

Mark, it's your mother. The story sucks

Very will doen looking to read more about this story

Feedback from the author

Thank you for all your responses.

Anon: Please tell me one or two things about what sucked ... it is the only way for me to grow as a writer.

Rocky: Yes, I admit the puberty thing was a stretch. Extremely late puberty was my way of throwing inexperience in with a legal age; I knew this was a stretch, I'll do better. As for knowing an orgasm when it happened; I figured what he saw was obvious, it was to me when I saw my first one. I will have to think about that.

Fire: I wanted to hold off on intercourse for this mother-son, so I left it open. If people like this story, I will do a sequel where there will definitely be more sex. I have other stories that I am working on, so we shall see.

Thank you again for the kind responses. Please, more constructive criticism.

Excellent story

These are the kinds of mother/son stories that I really enjoy; where it's not too sexy (characters are too open about sex) and it's not overly romantic in any way. This story is just right.

I love the playfulness and teasing relationship that the mother & son have in this story. Where the mom is upset, but she understands what he's going through. Later, she lets him see her, but not too much, then she pulls back when he crosses the line too fast.

My favorite part of this story are her dialogue scenes where she explains that she caught him and that she wasn't mad, but that she was willing to make him a deal and so forth because it's natural.

My only piece of constructive criticism that I wish this story had (and that you do in future stories) is that I wanted to know what the mother looked like naked in the beginning of the story. The son has a picture of his mother naked, and he later sees her in the shower, but you don't describe her breasts (how big they are, shape, nipples, ect..) and other attributes of her naked body.

Great work. I look forward to more stories. :)

nice and light....well done

good use of words, great suspense, well balanced.
I suspect 'anon' wants screaming more, along with lots of 'fuck,fuck,fuck' rolling on the floor full penetration sex.
You ended with a tantalizingly delicious sweet anticipation.
A light touch in a porno story? How very unusual and well done.

Super hot and erotic

I hope that his mom will let him have sex with her. They both need someone to fulfill their sexual lust, and her son is just the man that can do that for her.

He does seem to be a little dense or naive about a woman's body, so mom has a lot to teach him.

Thanks for the good read

Well done.

I thought it flowed nicely. A bit of a tease when she stopped his progress, until his apology.

I think the next step is for her to massage him.

But you're the author. Do keep it going, thanks. Don

Welcome

Welcome to literotica. a nice hot mother son story it is. well done. nice written. good skill you have to write a mom son story. so go on, keep writing mom son hot story. mother son incest is the heart of literotica.
waiting for your next.

Interesting story

Some realistic action and feelings. Many mothers try to ignore son's behavior. More should help in proper training of son's. It can be very beneficial

I can only agree. This needs many more chapters.

Many more chapters that mum tutors her boy on the female body.
Different ways to arouse, and how to connect with your partner.
Please consider doing this.

Elaborate on the dressing

I would love to see her parade more for her son in sexy outfits......

next

nice setup for chapter 2.

great job

One of the hottest stories ever

mum foto

my mum let me see her nude i also play with her and she play with her we sometime sleep together i tryed to fuck her but she said not yet

Would mom .....

.....like to adopt another son? lol I'm certain there are a number of things I still need to learn! Great imagination!

Continue the Story, pretty please.

you can make this story go a lot longer than just this one-shot. keep writing. you were doing good.

leann5red good mmm

keepup the grate wrok more pls xxxx

Truly A Nice Story

This story has a remarkable pace and sets a nice tone. There was a tension and a sharing of sensitive feelings that really made the story fun to read. I too, would like it to continue. The next lesson the Mother teaches will be exciting to read.

Excellent

Very well one. Looking forward to more.

love the build up and hope you'l continue to develop the

relationship towards a mutual sexual one. Please teach him how to eat pussy and fuck!!! As a mom I'd love to read how she goes about teaching her son to love her pussy and please her before they start to animal fuck!!

Pixxie I just found your story and loved it.

when I was 15 my mother and my next door neighbor did something sort of like the story. My neighbor taught me all about sex. My mom made me work for her all summer. I worked cutting grass. etc and then as a reward she would show me her body, have me touch and learn about it. Then she taught me oral sex and finally she taught me to fuck! A the end of summer she told me that my mom set this up and now she and my mom would be my lovers. And they were, Until I left for college I have two beautiful ladies as sex partners. I would very much love for you to write another chapter of this story and have her teach her son about fucking!! Or if you like we can chat via email and I'll tell you more of my story for you to write. Regards. Lee
needit700@gmail.com

part two

like to read the next part how she teachs him how to please her

Please finish

There's got to be a part 2....3.....&4 soon

☆☆☆☆☆- (5-)

I fully agree with HeyAll, 03/18/12: an excellent story.

Great story

Great story has me so hard and this ki g of my own mom

I LOVED YOUR STORY. I gave it a 5 (*****)! On a personal note, my mom also had Rubenesque figure...

Well, I was 63 the last time a got a crush on a woman with Rubenesque figure! All my life i have been attracted to women who had the same body type as my mother. Not exclusively, but whenever i saw a Rubenesque-looking woman, my first thought was, "OMG she is so fuckable!"