All Comments on 'Rainbow Needs'

This would be one of my picks of the day. First of all, I absolutely LOVE the way you used your adjectives following the subject- that technique shows thought, preparation and a unique understanding of the way words can be used in a way other than the boring usual way.

I loved these lines-

~I seek orange for passion hot

~I seek yellow for secrets shared and

~I seek violet for quietness gained

You could have made this a trite, boring poem but you didn't and it is a great piece of work. Keep up the good work and don't let go of that muse!!!!!

~ maria

I agree with Maria's comment. Very well done. My only quibble is S6L4, "living life" seems redundant to me.