All Comments on 'Just the Six of Us Ch. 23'

Hell yeah! Mike and the voice are back! Great story, as usual. Chapter 24 can't be here soon enough.

But since I could never do that to you. It will be my usual 5 glowing stars.

Another awsome chapter in this series. I loved how you brought the voice back. Everything else was spectacular and was well worth the wait. Thank you for continuing the story and i hope everyone else appriciates what you do.

Awesome chapter, plus kickstart my heart is my favorite song, made my day when I saw it

Its been way too Long.... And please tell us u have chapter 24 all thought out at least......

this is the best chapter in the series. the voices was a boss. can't wait for chapter 24 :)

dude...best chapter of the series hands down, keep up the good work!

Finally got it out and its brilliant. it blew my mind. keep it going and hopefully you wont make us wait as long for a new chapter... that is torture!! 5*

So glad you're back with us. 24 soon please..........

You sir are a god, we are not worthy!

i loved the way you brought back the voice.

please don't keep us waiting too long for 24, i want to see how the rest of the girls find out he has remembered the past year.

Let the earth tremble and the sky's open up, the master writer is back. Fuck its been too long but what an awakening. Glad to have you back. Yes I agree we are not worthy of your writing talents but we can at least shout it from the mountain tops until our lungs spray blood. MENTALCASE IS BACK. Stronger then ever.

I saw a long drawn out regaining of memory or a plot to just start from scratch; while it may have felt new again for a while, this is a better route. Thank you for returning to us.

I usually go to the New section when I log onto Literotica, and one day I accidentally clicked chapter 20. I had never read any of the incest stories before nor have I posted a comment, but started reading that one, and my inner voice made me start at the beginning and read them all. I enjoy how both your writing and storyline have progressed. I along with the rest of your fans have been eagerly awaiting this latest chapter, you did not disappoint in one bit. While not a fan of the father/daughter portion of the story, I do understand that this is an incest story, and is to be expected. Personally enjoyed the Beth/Sara scene, and how Emily was the catalyst for the Voice breaking out of his imposed prison. I can't wait to read about how Mike repays Emma, Sara, and Beth. I had to rate this as 5 stars, Great writing and am looking forward to reading more in the future.

bows down to the god of erotic writting u bless us with this materpiece thank u

I'm sooo glad the voice is back many times i've doubled up laughing to the things it comes up with.

What can I say that hasn't already been said? By far the best chapter of this series!

Hoping 24 is out soon!

Glad to see that you're back and writing more. Glad to see that Mike has regained his memories and the Voice is back, but not really sure about Emily and her dad. If you want to write about Emily, start an entire new series, but please keep this to just Mike and his sisters. Can't wait for more.

Simply AMAZING.....The BEST...and I do Mean the BEST that I have ever read......

Nice. Sweet, excellently written. Oh, and it's nice to finally see the voice comming back!

Finally! I say that for two reasons,1) a new chapter,and 2) the old Mike is back!

Can't wait for the next part!

omg that was the best chapter yet, i have been checking if this chapter has been released annd it was out today i was so excited i love your work and love the voice

Finally, the Mentalcase has come back to Literotica :-P Great to have you back and now, chapter 24 please. Yeah, we're impatient.

It's about time. I just started reading your stories last November and have waited for this chapter to arrive. It's good to see Mike back, I hope he gets to put the girls through Hell in a nice way. They need to get paid back a little.

Such a fantastic story Mental! I've been waiting for this chapter for along time and you delivered! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

The love I had for you, just increased by a factor of around a billion, then some. Amazing amazing chapter, avid reader since 4 was released, keep them coming man

For the love of all that is holy, please don't let there be anything like the same delay again in bringing out the next chapter.

Wow!!! I can give it no higher praise than that. I am blown away! You have definitely got me hot and bothered with this latest chapter. I really like how the voice exploded out of mike's head with all of his memories returning. I can't wait for the get back on all of his sisters, they were all extremely naughty and need some payback. Emma definitely needs to be punished and Beth's sexual appetite, DAMN! The scene between her and Sara got me dripping. You have to release the beast in her on a regular, please, you damn near burned a hole in the story just with the description alone of her sexual demon. I'm also kind of feeling this Emily character, she has a nasty side I'm really liking. I know i might get a lot of flaq for this opinion from your other readers but I think it would be hot to have her included in Mikes family fun, only if one or more of his sister's are envolved, it would be yummy to see her get ravished by the twins. Bring the slut out of her! Variety is the spice of life, as long as it doesn't jepordize his inner circle. As for your story, a 10 is deserving but alas the scoring only goes to five. I can't wait for the next chapter, if it's anything as hot as this you'll have hit another one out the park. You are one of the best writers on this site keep um' coming.

Thanks from miss silver766

Worth the wait, but PLEASE don't make us wait that long again!

This is the first comment ive ever made on literotica but this chapter is certainly a worthy place to start.

Best chapter so far by a country mile, the point where the voice returns you have no idea the smile on my face such is the depth youve created with this story. now as much as ive hated the wait from 22, ive got to say you pulled it out the bag and made it all worth wile however, i really hope were not subjected to such torture once more. I'm simply desperate to read more.

Again thanks for another excellent read but please release 24 soon :)

Great story as usual. I cant imagine how hard it to write a story, let alone one this long. I only hope that you see it through to the end as sometimes writers seem to lose interest and fail to finish the story they started. This has to be one of the best stories on lit and I cant wait for the next chapter. I just hope we don't have to wait 3 or 4 months for the next one.

Well worth the wait,(not saying I enjoyed the wait tho) when his memories returned I was overjoyed a very gud story id like to see you involve the,girls friends more tho I.e missy sally susan etc I think mike has a potential harem at his fingertips and u shuld use it

Best chapter yet imo! Memories coming back and the entire last page was the best part.

I've been waiting like everyone else, and i must say this was a great chapter. The beginning, of course had me want to stop reading, but i pushed through, and you've yet to disappoint. Love your work, although i do have one complaint. What's with Sarah calling Beth, "Bethy", and "Sugar" Those are two new phrases she usually wouldn't say, it felt sort of awkward being thrown into the mix now. That's all i have. Great work, Keep writing! I'll always be back to read your work!

I had a hunch when Emily said her mom had left she would wind up being with her dad.. totally love this chapter.. I agree, its easily one of the best, altho I think the chapter where the siblings went to the cayman islands was the best..

Great stuff, can't wait for the next one, and please don't make us wait as long.. haha

I got my wish. The voice is back. Thank you Very much because you really made my week with this story.

I have read all the ch and cant wait for ch 24 Great story ,keep up the good work!!!!!

Not many people appreciate the anticipation you created with the beginning. But I have to say was one amazing story, not just an amazing sexy ending.

Been waiting for awhile and watching for the next installment and as always you delivered, The way you built it up was awesome and I'm glad the voice is back, I can't wait till the next chapter. Thanks for your time and effort.

The voice is back and more Awesome than EVER!!! Nicely written. Sneaky tossing the twist of Emily and her father in there. Now you've got an option for a spin off. Seriously can't wait for the next one! I can't wait to see how the Voice and Mike torment Sarah, Beth and Emma. This should be interesting reading material.

I'm not going into a long winded comment about this chapter because you already know it was a awesome read. And for the people that are worried about Mike and Emily hooking up and becoming a item . Well use your brains and think before you comment on that. If that happened than this great story teller would have to come up with a new name for this fine story because it could no longer be called the (Just the Six of Us). Unless that is if something happened to one of Mike's sisters which i don't see that happening . Mental has a tumbler page to take and answer questions that you might have . Visit it if you want to read some really good questions and answers .Mental has a way with words and some of the questions and answers are hilarious . Thanks again Mental for the latest chapter and I think this would be a very good place to end this story.... Wait did i really just say that ! I must be freaking stupid . LOL Thanks again. P.S I guess my comment ended up being long winded . Sue me ....

i love ur twist but bring next part soon will be better pls

Really enjoyed the slow build of this chapter cannot wait for the next one when Mike and the voice start to get payback from the other sisters please do not make us wait as long for chapter 24 and thanks for a great read

Gotta start off by saying how incredible your work is.

I haven't been on the site for several months and this was the first thing I checked. I was ridiculously happy to find three new chapters and absolutely loved the narrative. I was legit freaking out about the accident and the memory loss. It's a sign of a good story that your readers are emotionally involved with the characters.

Plus the action sequences are amazingly done. They're extremely erotic and beautifully written. Keep up the great work, and I hope you get another chapter out soon. -Eorphus

Once again, another 5 stars chapter. So many great scenes in this one and still the promise of so many amazing ones still to come. I'm glad Mike and The Voice were reunited again, and of course that he got back on track with his sisters. I kind of missed Matt after being in the last parts, but it's ok, I'm sure we'll have him back soon enough, hehe. And Missy, of course! Once again, thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. ^__^

I've been reading this series for the past two years and I have to say its EPIC! Although I'm not a 100% for incest but this series makes me think otherwise, LoL. Some of these chapters I read made me cry with laughter so much it was hard to resume again. mentalcase22 for the love of "Mini Voice" and "sexual corruption" DON'T GIVE UP ON WRITING!!! I have to say you DO have a gift for writing, with this type of erotica its very difficult to have readers enjoy it. To be able turn something that people frown upon and turn it into alluring fetish takes true talent. Looking for to the next one!

Avid reader & Fan

OMG PLZZZZZ HURRY UP WITH CHPT24 THIS ONE WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME I LOVE YOU MENTAL CAUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The wait for this chapter was long, but well worth it. Now the wait continues for the next installment of this series. I'm totally hooked on this story every twist and every turn leaves me craving more. Definately a great story when you can read an erotic story that isn't packed full of non-stop sex and completely enjoy it. Thanks for sharing and please keep up the great work.

Thanks for the name-check, buddy. :-)

It's a privilege to edit your work. As you know, I'm a huge fan of this epic story.

Z

This chapter is good.. But a tad less class than your other chapters have been.. In my personal opinion.. the return of memory could have been more clinical and real.. here its sounds so not true...

But looking forward to your other chapters.. am not saying I do not like your series though.. It is much much better than many of the stuff that gets posted here..

Best of luck.. hope you navigate the rest of the story ..in your original class..! Cheers!

Good, better, best!

I was beginning to think you had fallen off of the planet. Don't ever let us go this long between chapters again. It is so wrong. I love this series and want more of it. I like the little diversion of the father and Emily. I am glad the you let get back with Danni first.....KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!

Damn for me this may just be the best part in the series, except maybe a couple of chapters. U really know how to take the reader along with the ride. I bet everyone whos read the story was grinning when the voice came back :) great work man, keep it up! Moar!!

Yes, good to have Mike and The Voice back!!!!!!!!! Fave Author, Fave Story/Series!!!!!!

About Damn time, damn rear killed you after the last chapter. Amazing work

OMG Im so glad to read this chapter soon as I found it. You have an excellent story going. I've been waiting and waiting lol. Im so into this read that I check daily for the next chapter. gr8 story ty, pls keep it going s you have done so far .

...my mind shouted 'Hooray!'. Can. Not. Wait for more chapters!

Sex is best with those that you really love, and who do you love best but your own family

I have to say this is a great chapter,

Its almost up there with the Island adventure, and the Mike saving dani one.

I like the building up and the exploding out of the voice. It was well played IMHO.

It would be great if Emily and Mike hook up as date partners but nothing else. it would keep things much easier if they knew each others secrets, and mike had someone to talk to outside the family. Write away, and i am sure i'll like it.

By which I mean both the author and the Voice. When Mike said "I remember" I couldn't help but laugh and clap I was so excited.

I'm also interested by the introduction of Emily as a character. It seems like she'll add some interesting new dimensions to the story. I kinda saw the thing with her dad coming, but it will make for some awesome plot development.

I've missed this series; please don't keep us waiting as long for the next chapter!

Bro awsm.....!!!! are the words for the 23 rd chapter...

keep going...!!!!

when would be the 24 th chapter arriving...???!!!!!!

This is one of the greatest story's I have ever read, please please please keep writing, I'll keep reading if you keep writing, and ignore all the haters, they are just pathetic.

signed, LG98

I would have to agree with his inner conscience... Sure as hell is GOOD TO BE BACK :)

Don't wait so long to post the next chapter. This is a great story. I can't wait for Mike to spank Em, hopefully in front of the others? Maybe Emily and her Dad and the others involved in the best Taboo will get together and have an orgy!!

I am greatly enjoying your story so far, but I'm greatly hoping to see some anal sex between Mike and Emma in the next few chapters. You've really set it up well with her submissive nature and going on at length about her perfect ass. It might make for good punishment for teasing, but that is just a suggestion. Again, I love your work.

i think Missy should get in the mix with Mike

Not just the voice but you too metal!

Dont let us wait for the next chapter and give it us soon. Cant wait for emmas spankomg!

Fuckin' A-mazing... Speechless.

Just wanted to say I'm glad you're back! Another excellent chapter!

Fucking welcome back!

Finally...!

I almost couldn't stand part 22. But now things are really getting... interesting, aren't they!?

Can't wait for 24!!! Isn't it time Mike and the 4 girls all get together at once?

More! Hurry! The wait was definitely worth it, but it still killed me!

Very hot. Glad to see you're continuing this story.

yay the voice is back. i love him. he/it is hilarious

Here we go again! I love this story so much, and this is another really hot chapter. Also, I like the way the story progresses. Keep it up! Please...!

I love this story! Keep going, don't EVER stop writing this wonderful story. Great Job. Good luck and happy writing. 5***** toby9790.

Fuck Yeah! FINALLY!!! Been waiting MONTHS for this! So happy the Voice is Back! Cannot wait for the next one!!

I really hope you have the story just rolling off your tongue and only editing is holding up more multi paged chapters. gr8 job so far, please continue with this fascinatingly erotic incestuous story.

Well, you certainly had me going there for a moment. I didn't think it was ever going to work out the way I was expecting. I read all 23 chapters straight through and enjoyed every one of them. It would be great to have more to this story. I hope you get inspired and continue. OUTSTANDING!!! I can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed this. Definitely going into the favorites!!!

damn! how i love the voice! i was so happy when i read that first "ass" from the voice. awesome story man, im loving every second of it

Love the character, but wish more time was devoted to the introduction, the writing from her point of view and the dynamic with her father left the outcome obvious (in the porn world, haha). Mike running into him and trying to start a conversation using the missing memories as a jumping point would have been a bit more interesting.

I hope to see more of her in the future, keeping up the whole theme of barely controlled horniness you have throughout the story. And if I may allow my colorful side to offer a suggestion for her character, I would love to see her try to control her desires through the use of a chastity belt (which still allows bathroom usage), but end up succumbing to her base desires and satisfying them through anal/exhibitionism/cum fixation or all three (while resisting vaginal)? =D

Good writing as usual, I think the way you keep Mike as the realistic good guy that is getting some well deserved happy time is what keeps us coming back. It makes the naughty bits, naughtier. The voice is a great hook and story device, I like how it has been toned down the last few chapters, makes it more impactful. Keep it up!

glad to see that you've put up another winner.don't take so long with the next one though.

mind. blown. I stumbled across this series a couple days ago and was immediately enraptured. The story is fantastic. Just enough detail to let your mind fill in the blanks. And it is pretty far out there while still managing to remain plausible. Came across a few grammatical errors, but nothing that hindered the writing in anyway. Utterly fantastic. I tip my hat to you, Mentalcase, for delivering a well put-together series. I can not wait to read the next chapter (please let there be a next chapter). Take your time, and don't let anyone rush you.

Another home run. The wait was killing me. Hope you can post another one soon!!!! Keep up the good work. Thanks

Hi

Great work with the story, character development, twists and turns. A different style with the voice making comments. A refreshing to go beyond the 'Wham Bam Thankya Mam' style. Really enjoyed it.

Like many others, i was trying to work out what would bring the memories back for Mike.

Who this Matt and Missy will be getting together, or are already together?

I've been waiting a while for the next part (not complaining or anything) but I really really enjoyed it. You're a great writer and keep making more, I love this series

read all 23 chapters in one go. 5/5.

Yes.

Just yes.

Thank you sir, very well played.

Have been waiting for another part to show up and man it was worth the wait. Can't hardly wait to see where you go next with this. Keep going, we all really like your work!

fucking incredible, great work. Just loved it, please do not keep us waiting too long for next instalment.

The wait was definitely worth it! Best one yet. Nice working in his old girlfriend and her father. Keep it up!

Hell yes, the voice is back, better than ever, and looking for vengeance. This is bound to be fantastic!

Ive been reading this series since you started writing and I keep re-reading until a new chapter comes out. This one I'm happy to say does not disappoint! I love the premise of the story and as with the others can not WAIT until another chapter!

I cant wait till the next chapter keep up the great work and don't let anyone tell you difernt this was the first story and aurther iv added to my favorets great job

Great job awesome and hot read as wells keep it up

A literotica master work.

Please man...dont delay the next chapters...sometimes its just to crappy when left on the hook and all you knw?? :) ...kepp up the awesome work..this is by far the best story series EVER...

So nice to have an author who consistently focuses on content/plot rather than just the sex... even though that's also great!

I was so _not_ seeing that turn in the story about him getting his mind back by kissing Emily. And nice way to exclude Emily too :)

I hope you see this feedback man because you are awesome.

Making a Lit user just to comment on your stuff!

I praise you for this great story. Can't wait for #24,

I know this is selfish and rude, but would you mind not leaving us with such a gap next time, its such an amazing story and I would love to read it for a lot more chapters.