All Comments on 'What Happened Last Night? Ch. 01'

Very good writen story. Please keep this up, I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Looking forward to Ch. 02 sooo much! Good job!

Commence with the hot gypsies!

I loved your slow, detailed descriptions and use of language.

New all time favorite story!!

Thanks everyone. It's encouraging to get such great feedback. I'll get you chapter 2 just as soon as I can.

Can't wait for more!

I don't usually like cheating stories but your words have somehow bypassed that. Great description, I'm not sure if I'd have been able to resist either. Pity he's such a skinny tosser.

Words escape me. Incredibly wicked.

I'm not into cheating stories either but this is totally hot!! Love to hear more of the pushing boundaries n big cock action n less of the cheating hating him shit, haha!! Just let him be less of a cock, she splits with jason n I'd love to hear more hotness!!! Great writing!!

totally awesome

addictive. completely.

Write more. Soon. Please.

Are you ever gonna finish this? Loved it

This is one of the best (if not the best) story on this site. I beg of you, please write more! You have a gift for it.

Please finish its been almost 3 months

Will you add another chapter soon? Loved this story

I want you to write more of this! Really, it's just so very good to read :)

This was great and says ch.01 so I am waiting! Great first story!

Any idea on when chapter 2 is coming? I'm checking weekly to see if it's happened yet. Very much looking forward to it!

Keep up the good work. Are there eager young things out there doing this?

Absolutely love this story! Love the dirty talk during sex!! I showed this to my gf she read it twice and... just let me say thank you! Agree with some about the cheating bit, but I still love this story and re-read it at least twice a month.

Oh, please keep going. You have the most perfect erotic style I have ever read. I have exhausted myself rereading it. I need the next chapter.

This story is the best one that I have read on this site, and I can't tell you how many times I've cum just from reading this story! I hope you come out with chapter 2 soon cause I can't wait! :)

chapter

please

I keep coming back to the authors profile every few weeks to check if the next chapter has been posted. Please please please post the next part. This is the best story on this site and leaves events unconcluded. It would make my year to read the next part.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.... don't leave us hanging!

Good job

This was really good. I'd like to see where this goes in the next chapter

What do I have to do for chapter 2????

Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback I've received, and still receive, on this story over the last few years. I'm glad you liked it as much as I did. I sincerely apologize for the intentional way I teased a sequel to this story. I never intended to write one.

This event, although superlatively embellished, did happen.

Since writing this, my only sexy story publicly published, I have become a successful freelance writer and found personal happiness. I realized recently that I quite like writing erotic fiction, but find it difficult to find time and motivation to do so.

It's a direction I want to head in though. I'd love to give you links to a site or an ebook or anything I have going, but it doesn't exist. Instead I'd be glad to take a commission in person from any of you for the continuation of this or any other story. I have a few such projects in the works right now, and I'm looking into setting up a formal professional arrangement.

I still get all of your feedback in my email and it's rewarding to read each comment. Thank you all, including those who never reached out. I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

Hi Gertrude, just wanted to say thanks for actually taking the time to respond to the many people expressing their interest in your writing. I just assumed you had moved on but if you actually do read the comments I'd just like to say that I had a vaguely similar experience with a girl only days before reading this story which has made this so much more erotic when I found this story. I don't really explore this site any more but if it means anything I do like to come back and reminisce over this story sometimes so it was pretty cool to see you had not forgotten about this.

Hi, I've been trying to get back into writing erotic fiction recently. If you want to check out some of my recent work, and you're ok with it getting a bit more weird, check out my author page on CHYOA.com here: https://chyoa.com/user/Gertrude_Perkins

I appreciate all your comments and likes and feedback and I hope to write much much more in the future!

This is a very well written story. I enjoyed the point-of-view of the female. I would like to hear more stories about Allie as I suspect she is going to be insatiable.

Hey Gertrude, this story was incredibly sexy and hot and just a great inner dialogue and descriptions. Are you planning on writing sequels to this story?

make more please

This might be the best story on here. Please submit more.