I Thought She Made You Up Ch. 07

I knew it!

I knew I would hate the sequel. I knew they would each die and be left alone, but I just had to read it and cry! An awesome story, loveable characters, great humor, with a final ending that gave hope that they could re-unite in the hereafter what's not to love! Thank you Mike

Very Good Read

I had to read the whole story in one sitting!

Now I am crying like a baby. An old man baby.

Great job.

from tynwood

This needs to be on amazon. Superb

Final Thought

I was going to give this the same 4 stars as the other parts, but even though I personally don't believe in an afterlife the very ending really got to me, and I had to give this the fifth star!

I did not invest in each chapter because as you know I do not like descriptive sex stories, however as a whole it was a wonderful emotional love story that caught my heart. The 5* is an overall grade for a well done love story.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Absolutely wonderful

This is the best story I've read on this site. Thank you for your gentleness.

Lovely

I'm supposed to be at an early morning meeting in just a few hours, but I simply could not stop reading until I got to the end. Thank you.

Just smiling

I've said enough in previous reviews, just know that I finished with a smile.
Jason

What a wonderful story!

Brilliant!

Brill

Great enjoyed so much didn't want it to end

Re-Reading

Even though I only read this a few months ago, I had forgotten the ending, and before I posted this comment I was reading the older ones, and saw that I had already said what I was about to say here!

The only thing I have to add was that I was reading the end through tear-filled eyes.

EPIC WORK

Sitting in my office with tears in my eyes. Had to stop Chapter 7 three times. Finally made it to the end. This is the best story I have read on Literotica. You could get an editor, an agent and lawyer up to turn this into a best seller. Good luck.

Tears, tears, tears...

Like several others in here, I had to stop reading Ch 07 more than once to let the tears clear from my eyes.

It was a beautiful and moving wrap-up, and a suitable ending to the story. Thank you again.

Jerry

Tears and more tears

I don't know how I got through the entire story without the waterworks continually being turned on. One of the best I have read

Definitely one of the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once I started...could not stop until I finished. Wonderful story!

YOU JUST HUNG THE SUN

WOW! This is one Beautiful story of true love between 3 people. Some narrow minded bigots will avoid these types of stories but deep down inside they wish it was them! ? The story is Fantastic! I give you every star in the sky after all You hung the sun with this story! ........Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 100 % o reading enjoyment! Bye.

Heart touching

a great story, some find only 1 love in their lives, some lose a love of their live, and with this story it was both and then the great experience of finding those loves all over again, very well written. please continue to write more, i will read them thank you

CLASSIC LOVE!!! 👏

The Best!

I have been reading your stories for many years. When the thought catches me I re read them. This, IMHO, is the best.

Thanks for writing and keep up the good work.

JH

Yes

Arrowglass said it best. A favorite for sure

Part one

I have read this many times and noticed this time part one is gone, what happened to it ?

just rip my heart out.

This is by far the best of you to date. male 48 ex military and my secretaries are freaked because I keep crying. broke me in 6 chapters. time for a couple of novals like DQ Steele.

as good as summer by the lake. My favorite
Thank you
jeff D.

Excellent

You must have found that editor. The typos and articles out of proper sequence decreased as the story unfolded or I just became accustomed to them and read over them correcting as I went. Great story, great concept I've been a fan of your writing for sometime and can't believe I missed this one. Thank you for the entertainment

Hats off qhml1

It was beautiful, it was bittersweet, it was perfect. Thank you for sharing this with us.

EXCELLENT

This your forte. Stay away from the one or two pagers. U have become one of my favorite authors. By the way, you must have one interesting, non-existent boring marriage. Best wishes on new efforts.

grief

Damn you,why do I always finish up sobbing my heart out for my own memories.I too am on the last lap and try to take comfort in the thought that we may all be together at the end but I am afraid.