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A Stringed Instrument Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/11/12

Please don't stop!!!!!!!!!

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by Ispy1003/11/12

Excellent

I cant wait for the new chapters, this is beautifully written.

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by Anonymous03/11/12

lovely

Keep going. It's lovely, sexy, more-ish x

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by elle_954903/11/12

Beautiful

Another wonderful chapter! This was absolutely mesmerizing ... and I cannot wait for more. Please hurry with your next chapter? I'm asking nicely? *sweet smile* ~ L

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by LenaLena03/11/12

I really like your style. :) A good mix of slow and fast, and very descriptive.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

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by Anonymous03/11/12

simply beautiful

Oh god, i love this story! you have me hooked. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
keep up the good work.
your writing style is awesome.

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by Anonymous03/11/12

Great work!

I love the characters and your pacing is perfect. Please keep writing!

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by lescntrygrl03/13/12

I love this and I cant wait to read more about these two! Keep it up

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by Anonymous03/13/12

Lovely

Great story; well told. Looking forward to next chapter!

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by Anonymous03/14/12

very enjoyable

Lovely story, great to see another good Aussie writer. Can't wait to see what happens next. Very beautiful style.

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by wordsmith7404/20/12

what a great story.

Can't wait for the rest of the story. Love your style of writing I feel so involved with the characters. I'm glad I stumbled across your stories, definitely one of my favorite authors. Keep them coming.

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by stickygirl11/03/12

This is so

so beautiful - I have those little pictures filling my head. Thank you

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by Bahama01/08/13

Wow

This is so good

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by Anonymous03/21/13

Ohh my goodness this is beautiful!!

So happy that I came across your work!!!

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by Scheherazade7304/16/13

This Story Is Gorgeous

...and gets sex between women just right. Thank you for such beautiful, quality work. It's a joy to read it!

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by Huntress260304/19/13

Lovely

Wow. My partner and I used to have sex like this. Reading this story makes me long for it more than ever. Perfectly written.

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