Another wonderful chapter! This was absolutely mesmerizing ... and I cannot wait for more. Please hurry with your next chapter? I'm asking nicely? *sweet smile* ~ L
I really like your style. :) A good mix of slow and fast, and very descriptive.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Anonymous03/11/12
simply beautiful
Oh god, i love this story! you have me hooked. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
keep up the good work.
your writing style is awesome.
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Anonymous03/11/12
Great work!
I love the characters and your pacing is perfect. Please keep writing!
Can't wait for the rest of the story. Love your style of writing I feel so involved with the characters. I'm glad I stumbled across your stories, definitely one of my favorite authors. Keep them coming.
Please don't stop!!!!!!!!!
Excellent
I cant wait for the new chapters, this is beautifully written.
lovely
Keep going. It's lovely, sexy, more-ish x
Beautiful
Another wonderful chapter! This was absolutely mesmerizing ... and I cannot wait for more. Please hurry with your next chapter? I'm asking nicely? *sweet smile* ~ L
I really like your style. :) A good mix of slow and fast, and very descriptive.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
simply beautiful
Oh god, i love this story! you have me hooked. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
keep up the good work.
your writing style is awesome.
Great work!
I love the characters and your pacing is perfect. Please keep writing!
I love this and I cant wait to read more about these two! Keep it up
Lovely
Great story; well told. Looking forward to next chapter!
very enjoyable
Lovely story, great to see another good Aussie writer. Can't wait to see what happens next. Very beautiful style.
what a great story.
Can't wait for the rest of the story. Love your style of writing I feel so involved with the characters. I'm glad I stumbled across your stories, definitely one of my favorite authors. Keep them coming.
This is so
so beautiful - I have those little pictures filling my head. Thank you
Wow
This is so good
Ohh my goodness this is beautiful!!
So happy that I came across your work!!!
This Story Is Gorgeous
...and gets sex between women just right. Thank you for such beautiful, quality work. It's a joy to read it!
Lovely
Wow. My partner and I used to have sex like this. Reading this story makes me long for it more than ever. Perfectly written.
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