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I Saw Mommy Doing Santa Claus

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/11/12

Bill or Donald?
Editing works.

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by Gizmor03/11/12

Santa Claus

Really enjoyed this story. Thanks.

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by tenbears4303/11/12

Ho Ho WoW!

I'm looking forward to next Christmas, hoping Santa will have a present for Me like that.

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by joemac7779206403/11/12

Nice!

That was an excellent fantasy! It was fun to read and more fun to put yourself into whatever role each of us wanted to assume!

Merry Christmas and Happy St. Patrick's Day!

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by YamiBoy03/11/12

^__^

A fun and good read. Nice work, Ahabscribe. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

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by Gunslinger00203/11/12

another chapter.

please another chapter with same mother and son on a different holiday.

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by Anonymous03/11/12

A really enjoyable fantasy tale !! As has been suggested, there are so many holidays to consider....

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by tiger201203/11/12

Good story

I really liked this story. It was a little different than some of your other mom/son stories. You did make the son sound childish. I don't know if I liked that or not. The sex was hot. I can't wait for another story. Here's a suggestion, maybe you can have a mother and son fall in love like some of your other stories. You are a really good writer :)

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by Anonymous03/11/12

Excellent, well written and very imaginative story - I liked it very much. You rarely disappoint us with your work. Yes, I too can imagine it as a 3D cartoon story, the sort of thing that gets featured on 'Actualincest.com'
Love to read a continuation of this story.

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by hieratic03/12/12

Well Done

as always you live up to your legend. By the way it was refreshing to have some Christmas in March. Now it is just me but I would have liked Mommy to have used the same slut talk on her son. Six Stars.

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by sngalmom03/12/12

wow my new favorite holiday

this had never been a holiday I cared much for. now I think I will look upon it with a whole new attitude thank you and Merry Christmas.

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by cocput03/12/12

two and a half months late; but so what?

THE most amazing Christmas story i have ever read. You proved again why you are the best in oedipal stories.

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by dnnkink03/15/12

an absolute new christmas classic!

it's good to know that even Santa thinks it's nice to be naughty! I wonder how mommy would handle little leprechauns and if she and her son will still be fucking like easter bunnies cum next spring?

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by homerjay04/03/12

wow

incredible! I look forward to re-reading this especially this holiday season. keep up the great work!

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by Anonymous04/04/12

A pile of dog shit.

By a writer whom loves to hear his pompous prattle.

Well deserved 1 star.

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by Anonymous04/16/12

5starslol

omg thats so hot i came on the first page lol...You r a very talented writer and you should write alot more of these types of stories.

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by vnjug09/07/12

So hot

The son filled his mother's unprotected womb with his baby making sperm. Will she allow him to make her pregnant?

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by Anonymous11/05/12

BOO

stupid, stupid, stupid

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by Anonymous11/16/12

One of the worst mindless and perverted prattle!

By a sicko psychopath. "1*".

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by tazz31711/16/12

WELL THE ANONs WONT LIKE

but for one thing It Sure Is Different. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by b00blover3612/27/12

WOW

I greatly enjoyed this story five stars are to few. My Christmas wish is a part two. Maybe Grandma could come visit one Christmas Eve

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by Anonymous01/27/13

fantasy funny

It gave me a mild chuckle or two and since it was even more fantasy-based than most, it was easier to overlook the stupid stuff. Three stars for the funny of it.

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by Anonymous07/31/13

What about johns grandmother ?

A second chapter would be nice , Santa could always extend the happiness that his Mother is receiving from John to his grandmother .

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by Anonymous11/20/13

what a load of bollocks

not even remotely entertaining or sexy just utter garbage.....

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by Anonymous02/19/14

Granny?

Yeah, this story leaves so much room to grow. I agree, what about Grandma? And all the other Naughty Girls with Naughty Sons that could help Santa throughout the Year. I think we need more.....

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by Sex4lf5705/11/14

" A load of bollocks"? What the fuck? It's a fucking fantasy story numbnuts! I thought it was fucking hot!! A second chapter with the grandmother would be awesome!

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by Anonymous12/25/14

I just finished ...

I just finished "Mom's Game of Dares" this fine holiday morning, complimenting the author for offering his erotic writing to this Santa ... Then I found this Santa story to top it off. You've done it again. So hot and erotic. Now I do have to close and deliver one more present to my bride of 50 years thanks to Ahab. I know her day will in improve when it starts with a very special Yule log to keep the flame alive. Ahab, thanks for your gift of writing, another gift that keeps on giving.

From NellaBarely2 on Literotica. And a big Thank You to Literotica for making this site possible for experienced authors like Ahabscribe

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