All Comments on 'I Might As Well'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent beginning!

Well written dialogue - both internal and external - and your descriptions are clear, concise, and visually arousing. Enough detail to allow for a legitimate suspension of disbelief without getting bogged down in long-winded/intricate rationalizations for his abilities. Good show, chap - well done. Quite looking forward to further installments.

~ennui

johnfell69johnfell69over 11 years ago
Clear and erotic

If this could only be possible with each of my exes!

KinkyWriterxoKinkyWriterxoover 11 years ago
Sexy

The ability to control someone to doing anything you want is so incredibly sexy. I love the descriptions of the events, the dialogue. Having her reveal what she hated the most and then doing it to her is absolutely evil - I love it! (Though part of me wishes it wasn't something as mundane as cocksucking.) I can't wait to read the next part!

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