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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/12/12

wish I had a girl like her

'nuff said

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by Erotonaut03/13/12

Fun little tale

I'd certainly like to hear more of Jill's adventures.

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by paisley_mari03/14/12

love it make more

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by digdaddyrich03/16/12

I didn't think she should still have been a virgin with her being in her late twenties

So if she still had her hymen at her age, she must have been taking it up the ass, because she deffently knew how to fuck.

A good story that was very loving and sweet along with being erotic.

Thanks for the read

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by BrettJ03/16/12

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In this day and age, with porn being available on TV specialty channels, on DVD / Blu-Ray, magazines, books and such, it isn't inconceivable that one could know how to have sex without actually having HAD sex, I can assure you. Glad everyone seems to have enjoyed the work though.

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by Anonymous01/11/13

A little something more

Nice introduction of Pete and Jill story, but the eventual hook-up years later would have been better with more development. Seems like it was too easily wrapped up.

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by Anonymous08/23/15

Nice one

Beginning, middle & End all done nice & neat.
Well done
HP

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by Goodhue12/21/15

Short, But Sweet!

- Nicely done,and it didn't drag on for a bunch of pages.

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