All Comments on 'Mom Finally Becomes June Ch. 05'

The culmination of a fantastic series of stories - well done. Any chance of some more?

i dont see how that can be the end. do his mom and aunt meet new guys, does he meet a new girl? if so how long do they keep sleeping with eachother til they do?

I think that it's the characters that make the story so good. All of the women deserve to have a good lover and a fulfilling sex life like Tommy has been able to give them.

They just didn't just get fucked, they got loved and sexually satisfied by Tommy, especially his mom.

I was wanting to read that Jane becomes pregnant and that's how June finds out that Tommy is fucking her sister.

All the way through this series it was a pleasure to read and an exciting erotic story.

Thanks for the great series.

i agree with the other comments you have to carry this on to see who he stays with

its realy hot all the ladies love a good seeing too

Awesome story... please add more to it

Not a word I normally use but it seems to fit.

I have loved the series and in common with the other commenters, please consider going further.

Now he needs to get both sisters in bed at the same time for a threesome.

Now he needs to get the two sisters in bed and introduce karen

I loved him fucking Karen and flashing back while he fucked the twins separately. He now needs to fuck the sisters together!! Please don't have this be the last chapter!!!!

A good, no, great story! Thank you!

Time to have Tom have all three of his women at the same time, also, it's time for the twins to inform him that they're pregnant with his twins, and Karen to tell him that she's pregnant with his baby. Lucky young man!

When...I...went...to..school...I...wasn't...taught... to...put...dots...everywhere...instead...of...the... correct...punctuation!

According to Webster's Dictionary, ellipsis, indicated by three dots, as in ..., indicates "halting speech or an unfinished sentence in dialogue." Why do you assume that you know when all you have to do is LOOK IT UP to find out.

I liked it but I feel as if there's a chapter missing between 4 and 5. I would also like t?o read abiut the 3 of them together. Good read though

Thanks for your comment. I've rewritten this story, expanded it some and taken out a lot of things I didn't like about what was published here at long intervals over several years. The additions fill in for some of the discontinuity which you pointed out between chapters 4 and 5.

Come on man. this cant end now, this is the best story i have read on this site. You need to have atleast 1 more chapter with June and Jane. A threesome and also doing them solo while both of them were sleeping in different rooms or something.

THIS IS ONE OF THOSE STORIES YOU NEVER WANT TO END! YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB WITH ALL ASPECTS OF THIS STORY. I COMMEND YOU. I AM A RETIRED EDITOR AND THERE IS ONLY ONE PROBLEM OR MISTAKE YOU MADE IN YOUR SERIES THAT SO MANY WRITERS MAKE. TRYING TO PUT EMPHASIS IN THE STORY BY ADDING AND OVER HYPHENATING FOR EFFECT IN THE LOVE MAKING. FUCK IS THE SAME AS FFFFFUUUUCCCKKKKKKK! ARG IS THE SAME AS AAAAARRRRRGGGGG! THEN THE ......, ........, ............! TRY LOADING THIS STORY INTO A TEXT READER AND ENJOY IT WITHOUT RUNNING A SPELL CHECKER, lol DAAAAAAMMMMMMNNNNNN! BEAUTIFUL STORY BUT? IF I'D HAVE RECEIVED THIS IN THE MAIL, I WOULD NOT HAVE MADE IT TO THE SECOND PAGE AND IT WOULD HAVE BEEN IN THE TRASH BIN WITH SO MANY OTHER BAD STORIES! GOOD LUCK.

I think you killed the story by introducing Karen in the story. You should have stuck with June and Jane for being an Incest story. You killed it men!!!

I give a minus 5 star.

Yek.

This is one of the best Mom-son incest story that I have ever read.

I also like you to introduce Karen.

Looking forward to seeing next chapter soon about June and Jane, and the next three weeks of Tom with Karen !

Keep up your fantastic work !

Can’t wait to seeing it !