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by Anonymous

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by sexyjcanplay03/14/12

NICE! Maybe a part 2.

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by klippert03/15/12

lets talk sex

That was a hot story. we didn't have skip though all the bibble babble. Great anticipation, before the blow job.

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by mumblegooseegg03/15/12

You're breaking the rules of Writing 101

In particular, pick a tense (preferably the past rather than the present) and stick with it. The story was OK but the technical weaknesses made it much less enjoyable to read.

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