All Comments on 'Ebony in Ivory, Again!'

not " the sudden paid " ! a needless typo in an otherwise beautifully crafted story !!

Your French was fine, madamoiselle! As to your story, well it was magnifique!! I would love to read the last part, where she decides to retire to her perfect getaway and stay with the new proprietor and Henri and Marthe. It would be quite interesting, non? Please keep writing!!