All Comments on 'Trisha's Transformation'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
New idea and great climax

I really like the idea and the ending was really unexpected. I would love to read more about some of the stories that can come out of a city like this.

I hope we get a part two or more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Incredibly...

moronic.

knickerlover13knickerlover13over 7 years ago
Hot

Maggie wants to be transformed. Love. this story.

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 7 years ago

Man you could have so many stories spun off this one.

I love your stories!!

JoJoLovesBigBlackCock13JoJoLovesBigBlackCock13almost 7 years ago
Wealth comes in many forms, rich in money, in power, in love, and in sexual fulfillment!

Loved this delightfully fun and steamy little fantasy! If only such a mind-liberating device such as this one existed, damn, the creators would become immensely wealthy from it. Not to mention all the beauty this technology could create worldwide, in freeing our sexual desires as we each learn our special place in this 21st century. Cheers, JoJo :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
great premise that spun out of control

loved the first page, but the rest felt rushed through.

ZellemeastoryZellemeastoryabout 2 years ago

I love this story so much! I would sign up for this device in a heartbeat.

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