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HouseholdGoddessHouseholdGoddessalmost 12 years ago
doing good....

The story was good. The actions between lovers was hot. My only suggestion for you is to try an editor from the site. I'm on the list and I'd love to help you with any of your next stories. Keep 'em cumming.

William smythWilliam smythalmost 12 years ago
Doing good. Yes, very good!

Somehow it seems presumptuous for someone with no stories posted to offer to edit the work of an author who has over 200 stories to his credit.

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