Sweet, loving wife (rich hubby)!
your writing skill is nice, I didn't like the story at all.
Sounds like hubby and wife are willing to explore fantasy while being safe....nice touch(for those who don't get it,the husband at the end giving her ointment is a clue,he wouldn't know to suggest that unless he was "the man"
Give me a ficking break. No. I mean GIVE ME A FUCKING BREAK HA
Yes I know. F i c k y o u t o o ! HAR HAR
The story has the mystery of the unknown told with incredible pacing. Anything more revealed would ruin everything. As I said in title, well done!
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Kinky fantasy
Sweet, loving wife (rich hubby)!
While
your writing skill is nice, I didn't like the story at all.
neat story
Sounds like hubby and wife are willing to explore fantasy while being safe....nice touch(for those who don't get it,the husband at the end giving her ointment is a clue,he wouldn't know to suggest that unless he was "the man"
SHIT
Give me a ficking break.
No. I mean
GIVE ME A FUCKING BREAK
HA
Yes I know. F i c k y o u t o o !
HAR HAR
Well Done
The story has the mystery of the unknown told with incredible pacing. Anything more revealed would ruin everything. As I said in title, well done!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to It Begins with a Call or
More submissions by CamillaHumby.