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Dad's Loving Step Daughter Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by yourlittlegirl899303/17/12

cant wait...

for the next one

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by Anonymous03/18/12

not bad..but hard to read

You need an editor, this story was difficult to read.

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by Anonymous06/21/15

Editor

You SO need an editor.

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by Bobossweetnessfreak02/06/17

Get an editor!!!

This was just as bad as the last one. Between more bad grammar and spelling, I won't be reading any more of your stories. BTW, SWEET is what candy tastes like; SWEAT is perspiration!! You did it in both episodes. Smh

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