All Comments on 'Dad's Loving Step Daughter Ch. 02'

by BigDaddioDave

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yourlittlegirl8993yourlittlegirl8993about 12 years ago
cant wait...

for the next one <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
not bad..but hard to read

You need an editor, this story was difficult to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Editor

You SO need an editor.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakabout 7 years ago
Get an editor!!!

This was just as bad as the last one. Between more bad grammar and spelling, I won't be reading any more of your stories. BTW, SWEET is what candy tastes like; SWEAT is perspiration!! You did it in both episodes. Smh

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