for the next one
You need an editor, this story was difficult to read.
You SO need an editor.
This was just as bad as the last one. Between more bad grammar and spelling, I won't be reading any more of your stories. BTW, SWEET is what candy tastes like; SWEAT is perspiration!! You did it in both episodes. Smh
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cant wait...
for the next one
not bad..but hard to read
You need an editor, this story was difficult to read.
Editor
You SO need an editor.
Get an editor!!!
This was just as bad as the last one. Between more bad grammar and spelling, I won't be reading any more of your stories. BTW, SWEET is what candy tastes like; SWEAT is perspiration!! You did it in both episodes. Smh
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