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by Anonymous03/31/13

Confused.com ?? Suream.com!!!

Great idea and great start however you have now disappeared so far down the rabbit hole it isn't returnable and best you can do at this stage is take the lot to a decent editor and make a few chapters less, but of far higher quality.

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