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Wonderful
What I loved about your story was the quick background about the main couple and then rapidly going to the sexual seduction. It was fast, intense, erotic, and highly arousing.
By the time some writers get to the point I am so bored that I don't want to find out what happened.
Your story took hold quickly and the only thing is I wanted MORE, MUCH MORE.
Thanks
Len
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