thanks for bringing this back to life. I hope you have more coming soon. Its wide open and cant wait to see how it unfolds. ty
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Anonymous03/19/12
i love it, i can't wait for more!
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Anonymous06/16/13
could be good BUT
you are way to slow at adding chapters, this one took two years. IF you continue keep it to just them no other relatives or outsiders and keep all the fetish and BDSM crap out of it it just drags it into the gutter.
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gr8 new chapter
thanks for bringing this back to life. I hope you have more coming soon. Its wide open and cant wait to see how it unfolds. ty
i love it, i can't wait for more!
could be good BUT
you are way to slow at adding chapters, this one took two years. IF you continue keep it to just them no other relatives or outsiders and keep all the fetish and BDSM crap out of it it just drags it into the gutter.
Very Nice
Again I like the characters and the way the story moved along. I'll be reading more of your stories later.
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