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by Mostera103/20/12

Curling

A very mentally challenging winter sport. I am very impressed how you wove this relatively unknown game into a very poignant love story! Well played! Well played.
Thank you! 5*****
M1
PS: Glad to see Kelly got 'shot rock' at the end.

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by Anonymous03/21/12

More please!

A little fast-paced for my liking and I can see that, in its own way, the story stands up on its own, but this is only the beginning for the two protagonists. What else is to come? I think there's still mileage in this one...

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by tazz31703/21/12

CURLING FOR HAPPINESS

with curling for love and a trophy family. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by drteetho05/16/12

Thank you

To those that read, voted and commented on this story. I am submitting Chapter 2 in this story tonight and it will, I hope, be posted soon.

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