All Comments on 'Keith Ch. 03'

by LaLaLou

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LaLaLouLaLaLouabout 12 years agoAuthor
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Oh Gods, I'm so sorry all of the speech is jumbled up together! Technical fault?

loniekloniekabout 12 years ago
Like it

I like this story but can you make it longer and maybe quicker? I know it can be hard to write but I want to read more!

Boywndr86Boywndr86over 11 years ago
Next chapter?

When does the next chapter come out?

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