All Comments on 'The Academy Ch. 01'

by Sympathyforthedevil

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
welcome

Your story is very hot. As a first chapter it lays out an array of possibilities to come while successfully provided a nice jolt of filthy detail.

I look forward to seeing more from you.

dutch513dutch513about 12 years ago

good but needs more story line .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
awesome

five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Good start. Please educate these beautiful girls about the beautiful and erotic acts of anal, ass to mouth and ass to other girls' mouth.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great

Great story, love the endless possibilities of sleaze... looking forward to ch 2

bigmasbigmasabout 12 years ago
Great Start

Cant wait for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
YOU'VE GOT IT GOIN ON

Story is a work in progress with excellent possabilities!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Go on

I'm listening.

MerlangueMerlangueabout 12 years ago
Very promising.

The prelude of this story is very promising of hot sex.wish a suite very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Good start, has promise,...

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