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109 Brevard Street

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/22/12

Not my favorite

Not my favorite. Another tag you should have is non-consent.

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by Anonymous03/22/12

Serious New Talent Here

I'm just going thru your work. Well done on so many level. I read a lot here and for a number of years now on all the genres. You're definitely one of the top talented authors I've read. Keep it up!

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by Anonymous03/22/12

Superb!

More please.

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by William smyth03/22/12

A great combination

Graphic sex and good writing. Hard to beat.

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by Anonymous03/22/12

i'm not far from you

hey, i loved your story, if you would like a better living situation we should talk, i hope you're liking the area

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by Anonymous03/23/12

Disappointing

The story started off good... liked where it was going, but the twist totally turned me off. You should add the Non-Consent tag or list it in that category instead. Sad that a good story has to turn vile.

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by Anonymous07/25/12

very hot story made me so hard i would like to meet a man like billy an mister t because i like to suck cock an do anal i would like to make porn movies

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by Alex301012/17/13

Awwww.......

Well fuck! plot twist!!! It was so sweet then so domineering ....Alex likes domineering and plot twists.

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