You Don't Choose Love

What an absolutely lovely story.
Cheers.

First Rate

A really good job Demure, A really pleasant story that could easily be fact and which is a pleasure to read. The pub scene was definitely a keeper totally believable, a typically Welsh pub with the fireplace in the bar and quiet enough to read. Brings back lots of memories Definitely a 5. Keep it up,

BUT IF YOU DONT OR CANT CHOOSE

then its arranged, some times by magic doll. TK U MLJ LV NV

Channeling Macbeth, eh?

I saw that line that you borrowed from the play ! *smiles* I honestly love your work, Demure! What a grand story this is -- wonderfully realized, happily concluded. Hal is a love, and Karen is a lucky woman! The story is so real -- one almost feels as if one knows these people! Well done! :)

Your pseudonym here suits your work to a T. It's demure, but definitely not lacking in passion.

CHOOSING LOVE WITHOUT MELANCHOLY

somehow it will find its way to where it is supposed to be, TK U MLJ LV NV