All Comments on 'I Can Feel You Close'

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The_MistressThe_Mistressabout 12 years ago
Oh my

There's so much passion here. So many feelings so close to my own. Wanting, needing, loving... It captures it so well.

My advice to you is to read your story over, or have someone edit it, so it flows just that much better. But otherwise... Wow.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
IF WISHES AND WANTS

could transcend mediative boundaries. TK U MLJ LV NV

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