An Affordable Insemination

wrong choice

If they'd just used the turkey baster method this could have all been avoided.

You are a worthless sick fuck!

This is just nasty stop writing!

First Time

This is the first time for me to call a story a steaming pile of shit. Licyou69 has taken an interesting idea and turned it into a well written waste of time. I do tank the author for making it short.

i want more…….

keep writing…...

Good Read

I liked your story & dont care about what the others say, continue this as a series.

continue this as a series .... a long one.

Don't pay attention to the hate anonymous replys

Most of them are the same three or four people commenting over and over again.

Its rather sad they don't have a life beyond harassing writers they disagree with.

I rather liked your story and wish you could write a sequel to it. I really want to see the husband try to convince the wife maybe she shouldn't do this after all only for her to do it anyways and to cut the husband off completely.

Also I like to see maybe Sandy and Eric get so much out of it that it eventually makes Amy jealous. Mad enough to take her aggression out by verbally torturing 'Sandy's Husband'.

Getting off topic a little I have to ask this one thing - what is the husband's name - you know the narrator's name? I searched for an indicator. With first person perspective stories you either have the narrator tell us his name at the beginning of the story or you have another character call him by name when speaking to him. That is the inherit problem with first person stories. You have to find a clever way of telling us the narrators name.

For now I will refer to Sandy's husband's (the narrator) name as Mike.

Like I said maybe Amy gets so jealous over Sandy and Eric physical relationship despite the good intentions that she starts mind-fucking Mike's emotional well being.

Maybe, as the story progresses, she slowly seduces Mike only to call him worthless before they fuck because he has so small a dick in comparison to Eric that she can't in good conscious lower her standards.

There is so many possibilities.

Thanks for the read,

John

Great story!

I loved it! Keep up the good work.

want to hear more

is their sex hotter than the first one

johnstang2, if i were u

Get a DNA test

An Affordable Insemination continues?

I wanna see how far this arrangement will go. Very hot.

please continue this story!!!

1*

Another fucking wimp ass cuckold.

Wimpass

Another fucked up useless wimp crap.

I would have eaten her

I would have eaten her to reclaim her as mine, and to prove that I still love her, but also because I like cream-pie!

Damn The Last Two Lines Killed It

I was hoping that in the coming weeks she would be proven to be pregnant..but not by Eric...but by her husband. Now if she continues to prostitute herself to Eric, it would serve as justice that she be pregnant by her husband. But I see Eric making demands that no one but Eric can touch Sandy. I
It would also be fitting if Amy and Sandy's husband got together and Amy got pregnant. But I can tell from the fact that Sandy's husband has been unnamed that he is not going to be a major character in this story. Just another wimpy cuckold. I am not sure this story can be redeemed with a second chapter. As it is, asshole Eric is set up to be the hero.

stupid creepy story.

Hope writer gets cockold like he wants.

dumb

dumb 1 stat or maby 1/2 he should of been banging his sister-in law.

i totally got tricked

I thought that the mc would impregnate his sister in law but he gets cuckolded! Fuuuck that pissed me off I scrolled down hoping for amy and the mc to get together but instead i get

"Honey, Eric wants to keep doing this every day until we are sure that I am pregnant."

Now I'm depressed... fuck you eric go die in a fucking ditch and mc divorce your fucking wife that dumb bitch then go kill herself for even contemplating any of this.

Side note I dont mean the author kill themselves. They write i read whatever but I'd like an ending where the mc leaves the wife gets with the younger sister and takes the kids with him. I refuse to believe this dumbass whore of a wife doesn't know they can inseminate her with his seed with out a doctor or sex. That cheating bitch wanted to have sex with eric

For once a revenge on being cuckolded for fucking once.

WIFE'S NEW COCK

Should have made sure the wife was firtile before the event, rather remiss of Sandy and would only be the once

A serious plot hole.

I though not explaining how the husband was not getting his wife pregnant was a plot hole. If husband was not sterile by some means, there would be no way to know who the father of any child was.

Come on complainers.

Laugh a little! Can't you see the humor in this little ditty? Thanks to the author for the effort.

Turkey Baster

Whatever happened to the good old turkey baster? Much better than a smug BiL who might (and DID) show Sweetie that Hubby isn't doing it all that well for her! And, yeah, the actual conception does NOT happen in the first three minutes after ejaculation! Hubby shoulda been offered his choice of another orifice or appendage by Sweetie.

Missing was any accounting of the kids in the house! Sweetie is clearly fertile, and her peak fertilization time is easy to determine, especially if she gets mittelschmerz

sandy wanted it

I would like to hear what's in store for sandy what's up with husband hope you finest writing where this going to lead for cuckold hubby...