An Affordable Insemination

Same story different person

Atleast come up with something original, like the husband got her pregnant and now Eric and Amy are raising there kid!

cut your losses divorce her and let her go live with amy and eric

you have the evidence of adultry and her pregnancy with another mans baby. its their word against yours, she is a bitch and a slut fucking a worthless piece of trash with no real excuse. Of course you could blow up the house with all three of them in it and do the world a good deed cleaning up the gene pool.

Dumb Story

No Im sorry a really dumb story What garbage

LW or Cucksville?

WTF?? Are there any real LW stories or have the cucks taken over? In which case, make a new listing for these sick puppies so that I can avoid them.
Just tag them cuckers and I won't have to jump to the end to see if these twits are into creampies.

What the hell?

Eat her sweet nectar? Seriously, you sure he isn't trying to eat another mans cum?

This was seriously stupid and I feel my iq dropping just from reading it.

Actually

Despite the Pavlov reaction of some commenters, this story is both believable and promising. This well-written story could be the base for several sequels in which both hubby and Sandy develop their reactions and make decisions. If Eric the slob wants to continue with Sandy, for example, what does she want and how will hubby react? How long will Amy accept any continuing relationship with her louse Eric and her sister? After all, any bady will still not be her child.

total garbage

another cuckhold story. what man would let another fuck his wire for two hours so she could get pregnant with his sperm... total bullshit let her use a turkey baster. now she may like to have sex again and again till this marriage is over.. sicko writer

IT'S TURKEY BASTER TIME

PURE HOG SWILL

Believable and promising?? As much a bullshit comment as the story.

What kind of a loser author writes this kind of trash?

You post your story, 1 star is voted without reading the story. The tags are enough to make me not read your stories just go to the end where the voting is and press that 1 star rating. I don't care how many creampies you eat or how many bastards your whore drops out of her gaping cunt. it's your fetish and you have to live with it like all the other real out in the open cucks. You should really tell your freinds what a cuckold you are, the same goes for all the real cucks that defend these stories, tell the world how useless they are to humankind. Willing cuckolds serve no purpose in life and so evolution should find a way to dispose of them, slowly and painfully.

Re the last post.

There are some strange folk on Lit. Strange and deranged.

lame

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"1 star without reading"

must be Random, he proudly proclaims he votes 1 w/o reading, absolutely no fucking life whatsoever to troll stories and vote 1 and leave a comment. Pathetic.

hit and run

story tells nothing of any worth...so the wife will find a pig so attractive she would do it for pleasure? And hubby who obviously doesn't like it will just sit there for hours and then let him do it for a month? At least finish it,this goes nowhere.

Not a single intelligent person in this

story. Stupid people making stupid decisions. That makes everyone unlikable. You should have finished this in one chapter. This cliff-hanger makes the narrator seem even stupider than the wife and in-laws. IF he does not divorce her, then he deserves the humiliation he gets.

fucking crap

mindless pieces of meat, pathetic.

brain dead

Erotic?

Only to braindead and jaded cuckolds that don't have sex anymore.

Consider the author...

he freely admits to being bisexual, so this is probably a great fantasy for him. Stinks for us... but we can always move on to the next story. I just wish I could vote negative numbers...

If you don't like the story or the author don't read it! It is JUST A STORY! JFC some of you folks needs to get a life.

NO, NO, NO..........

Why couldn't you have said no and not written this piece of shit.

Thank you!

If you do not like the story stop reading and push only the 1 (one) star! If you like it push the 5 (five) star. If the story is not disgusting but it is not my cup of tea I do not push anything. I recommend others this tactic only push 5 or 1 stars. However I like those reader buddies who have already read the story and from their comment know what kind of story and I can avoid to read it. Thank you for the not OTHER PERSONAL OFFENDER COMMENTER BUDDIES to predigest many disgusting story for others!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .

Admit it Duna, you're in correspondence with that fuckwit JohnDoh! aren't you?

whose earlier comment, (which isn't RHinSC, for two reasons; 1. He's man enough to leave his handle. 2. He's got a dry sense of humor(pretty harsh admittedly)), is typical of his endless trolling of Literotica. Leaving the same negative comments again and again ad nauseum.

Duna, there are plenty of stories on LW that deserve critisicism and praise and all scores inbetween. Take off your increasingly grimy spectacles and give them a clean.
your friend,
witless.

Now I'm going to read the story. There isn't any boy gay stuff in there, Licyou?? I won't vote if there is, or might even vote you low.

Pretty lame knock-oof

The story, such as it is, was a very lame knock off of Neil Anthony's "The Gravid Contract

Dear friend witless you don't appear to have signed in with your username does that make you less a man? All you did is troll duna and someone called johndoh who is he by the way?

Insemination :-)

Why do these people read something that they don't like? Just like sticking the finger in the fire an wondering why it burns. I for one enjoyed your story and am waiting for the next chapter. Thanks.

poor Gizmor

Welcome to the land of the closet cuckold: guys who get a little stiffy reading cuck stories but feel shame so post a negative "denial" comment to fool themselves.

This is actually very humorous, it's a well written parody.

I hope...Amy was hilarious, good characterization.

five stars. Thanks.

how inventive - NOT - - And sick YES

So this excites you eh writer. Drowning puppies probably really gets you off.

Speaking of sick puppies - this wasn't erotic but it must excite a few numb labidos by the comments. Those are the jaded that only can get it up by a sordid fetish.

Gets you the attention you seek tho eh.

Superb - looking forward to ch 2

Ignore the criticsm, this was excellent.

Hey not bad

Plain and simple, I liked it. Thanks

Speaking of closet cuckolds

How did drowning puppies enter your depraved mind? Did that seriously occur to you cucky? Because the rest of us sane people don't read a sex story and suddenly that shit pops into our heads. Seek help cuckboy.

...and so???

So what happens next? Although well written with good pace it's left me feeling unsatisfied - coitus interuptus :(

More impregnation please

We need many more impregnation stories involving cheating wives like this. Excellent

Another closet-queer cuckold writer

How in hell is this LW? Just write Gay stories, sausage sucker.

Damm!

Damm?

Not familiar with that term cuckboy, sounds like you were trying to say "damn" but were giving your boyfriend a hummer and stretched out that last "m" a bit.

3 stars

do not stop writing. I do read your stories and occasionally comment.
You wrote 3 stories in a rather short time span. if i were you i would leave them as a draft to ripen on paper and in my mind for a while.

This story is like a screenplay for a short straight-to-the-point porn film. It could be more convincing though and still full of desire, lust and yes out-of-ordinary love.
Wife's character was never developed.

You do have some strange readers who keep reading your stuff although they hate it or do they? Why do they read Loving Wives if they expect those wives to be faithful? You can't choose to watch Japanese Incest Porn and then bitch it is sickening... Then you watch it again & again & bitch even more. Hello!

wrong category

Lit really needs a straight cuck category so I can stop reading this garbage by accident. Thanks for ruining my evening... but what I read of the story was really well written.

I read and ...

then read the comments. Wow. . .

I stumbled across the link in one of the forums of Lit., and took a chance on the story, without knowing the content. The more I read the more I enjoyed the mental struggle the man was making and it was somewhat believable. I know families have done this, so that is what makes it believable. I think the tale was well written and though not everyone's cup of tea it still deserved a five from me, because it left me curious as to what would happen next. I would have loved to have read what happened behind the closed door and honestly that's the only thing I'd have changed about this and probably why so many folks hate it - you didn't show the dirty stuff that would have really got them wet and aching. ;) Thanks for the story and write what you want to write, in the end that's what matters. ~ Red

Oh quit your damned whining you little babies.

If you didn't realize this was a hotwife story, you are an idiot. The title screams it. Affordable Insemination, As in artificial insemination that is very expensive. How do you get it to be affordable? Find a willing guy to do the inseminating Nothing like opening you pie hole and showing how stupid you really are. Again, if you didn't know this was a hotwife story, you are stupid. Just go slash your wrists and rplease do not reproduce.

And hey, here's another clue for you idiots. Just go to the last page, this one only has one page, and look at the tags. The tags will tell you what to expect in the story. Look at the little shaded spot right above the Report a Bug Section. It says, "Tags for this story." Well fucking hit me over the head and call me Sally...tags...and the first one says cuckold. Now, don't you feel stupid?

Idiots.

Hey Anonymous-quit your damn whining

You get out of the wrong side of bed or maybe wife didn't give you any last night. Maybe she made you lick up her lovers leavings. Don't that just gripe your ass, all that whining, works both ways you know. If it isn't the cucks whining about the non-cucks it's the non-cucks whining to the writer for writing a piece of trash. Now don't that just gripe your ass. As if your ranting is going to change anything.LOL

Dumber than a stump

Both this story and the husband. We're supposed to believe that the husband gave no thought to the fact that getting his wife pregnant might take awhile or a few tries?
And what about living with his wife for the next 9 months? And what if she has a problem caring the child to term? He would have been better off paying to have Amy implanted with a fertilized egg from his wife. What about the rest of the family helping Amy? This whole story is so implausible it's laughable. What a crock!

More

Story is good but needs more. How many times did they try? Did Hubby ever watch? Did they have good sex after impregnation?? Maybe is these questions are answered, the haters will back off.

Hate wimps

Should make the hubby beat his ass and divorce her

Simple equasion...

...no balls....no kids! This site no longer is "loving-wives" but "cuckies corner": More than 75% of all stories published here als cuckold-worship.
Let´s move on to sites that deserve it.

pizz poor

wifes a slut just wanted to fuck eric

Make another chapter

What happens does she get pregnant? Or does she just keep fucking him?

He should fuck Amy Also

It would just be fair that he and Amy would be encourage to fuck also instead of just waiting outside in the living room.

How Sad

It is hard to fathom that there are readers that get off on this willing cuckold drivel. Almost as believable as the husband saying, "Sandy, I know you love the smell of napalm in the morning, but are you sure I need to coat myself with it? I really should have told her not to strike and toss that match."

great story!!

I enjoyed every word of your story and thought it was well written. It always puzzles me why others read the story and then leave all the nasty comments? If you ain't into fantasizing about your wife getting knocked up by someone else you won't like it. I'm not into gay stories so I don't waste my time reading them and writing nasty comments. I hope you write more stories like this one. Often what is erotic to one is disgusting to another.