All Comments on 'Just a Game Ch. 01'

Sweet. Hot. And believable in some odd way. Hope I spot the next chapter when it comes out.

chapter 2 please :) i loved it very realistic! i can't wait for more!!

I like her. He is kind of a dick, but I have faith that he'll grow on me.

That was hot!!!!!!! Love it already! Didn't think I could love another first chapter as much as I did Turning of the Stars, but I guess I was wrong!!!

I hope the next couple of chapters come quickly!!! I really enjoyed how the story was told!!! Your story's are the best!!!

The best part is that I feel like this is so realistic. It could happen! And even if it couldn't, you're writing makes it seem like it could. ^.^

Just found it in my bookmarks, and came back to read it again. It's *that* good.

This is my favorite story on this site to date. It is bookmarked on my phone and I read it at least once a week. I never get tired of it.

Wow, that's quite a compliment. Thanks so much. I'm glad to hear you are enjoying the story so much. I'm still working on the next part, Aaron and Avery's story of course. It's coming to me in bits and pieces, but its definitely coming.

I love it!

Turning Of The Stars is the best story on here, and I love this one so much, too! I keep coming back to read more. You write very sexy men in both Grant and Gabe. I can't wait for you to post a new series!

A believably hot story. Since there's a Chapter 2, I presume Christmas vacation will become even hotter. Looking forward to Cass and Gabe finally doing it.

of a story. While I'm delighted to find it here on Literotica, I have to wonder what the hell it's doing here? I mean, it deserves a better fate. You can write! I should have used all caps---but I really mean it. YOU CAN REALLY WRITE. so get your ass in gear and send your newest materials out to the world of publishers. It may take some effort on your part, but one of them will recognize your talent. Go make yourself a zillion bucks, you deserve it.

Regards,

Paris Waterman AKA GrouchoJim

I don't understand why this is in romance, instead of Erotic Encounters.

There's reluctance/non consent elements here.... No communication.... Sex driven... Doesn't feel like it's in the tight category