All Comments on 'The Secret Breeder'

dual genitalia ... just blew my mind

Wonderful story with love, betrayal, tenderness, sex.......... Great job.

Great story! but rewrite it and make it longer! where does he come from? how did he pick her did he hunt her? what was their life like? what was their passion like? how many close calls with that other sex organ? how did she feel about him?

Hah! Sorry for the brevity. Just wrote it fast, as it was a joke about using morning wood. I'll write the prequel soon for ya when I come up with content for it, Anonymous. Thanks for reading folks!

Yes write more!

Will they be able to act as a breeding pair, and stay mated?

I *LOVE* the LAST FOUR WORDS, of this story....

"You Could've Just Asked!"

(It sounds like that she would've been "more-than *WILLING*", for a little "Interstellar Nookie!")

Not only should you do a "Prequel", but also a "Sequel" — find out what happens to our "Star-Crossed Lovers!"

I would love to see this story expanded in to a series! There is so much mysterious background that you hint at. Such a tease!

Loved It! Followup Planned?