by wanderinjoekidd
vary nice i used to love going to the bookstore and sucking guys off wen i was younger and single now i just get to suck guys off with the wife lol things are much better now
I like your work, I've read both of your submissions. I'm not criticizing or anything, this is fine, but I thought the story was going to go a little differently. When I started reading I was like wow - this is going to get hardcore, but then the beginning was inconsistent with the end. Only oral in the end, when at the beginning you're talking about lost underwear and whatnot.
Is starting every other sentence with...Thomas. I felt like I was reading a little golden book.
This is a great start to a very hot story. It felt as if I was there when I was reading. I look forward to meading more. Thank you for your post