The Bully Likes Boys

short and sweet

I liked it.

Pleaaase

continue!

Unsatisfying

I know this is fantasy but when you start talking about 20-inch dicks and other physical impossibilities I get distracted from the story. And why didn't you give us some more descriptions about the sex act itself? The bully got his hands on the nerd's piece and then it was all over.

This is just ficition, hahaha

Still - if you are talking about a penis of 20 inches and 6 inches thick, this is just too laughable - but such trash should not be allowed even in the category "Fantasy". It seems to me that you have very little self confidence otherwise you wouldn´t expect us to read such unerotic literature - it´s just a turn off (tell me, which man or woman would like to be speared and ripped by such a monstrosity - probably only if they are themselves into payn-play!

Just Stupid

Guiness Book of World Records: one person, worlwide, so far, with a 13" dick. But, then again, the blood supply and Blood Pressure needed to maintain an erect 15" penis would probably render anyone totally senseless.

No imagination

You people need to stop bashing those who take the time to write things for others to enjoy! If you don't like the concept behind the story, then move on! Don't read it! And certainly don't whine about it! This is fiction. It's obvious. Just because YOU can't imagine it doesn't mean no one else can.

Personally, I fond the story rather hot and would LOVE to see it continued. Please, don't let the imaginationless among us deter you from treating those of us who enjoy your work to the next part of this story.

I was turned off when you said 15 inches.
I stopped reading when you said 20.