by Jett_73
Really, really liked this story. Brilliantly depicted characters, you almost feel like you know them by the end, wonderfully written.
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I really enjoyed this story.Especially the way you presented it. Please do not stop their story here. I would love to read more.
Very good writing, great characters, plenty of hot. Ebony, Ivory, straight, gay...whatever..you've got the knack.
I feel like I know the characters already……please keep the stories coming.
Ok, this is sort of funny. I read the story and I'm sure I initially read the title, but I must have forgotten it by the time I finished reading and wrote my title comment. I find it funny that I chose "Odds and Ends" and your title is "Salt and Vinegar." Anyway, I occasionally see and post with you on the boards and thought I'd sample your writing. This was the first story I read and found it very interesting and fun loving. I enjoyed the story, your characters, and your style of writing. Here's to hoping you decide to write and post more of your stories.