Please ignore the comments from idiots who post meaningless purile comments without even reading your story. More dialogue from your characters usually helps readers to get to know your characters and makes the story more intimate. Looking forward to reading your next story. Five stars.
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Anonymous03/24/12
shit
Big pile of shit
She is a gutter slut, takes nothing to get in her
Hes a WACC that is finally seeing she does not really care about him
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Anonymous03/24/12
Suite or Sweet
Were they in a suite or sweet?
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Anonymous03/24/12
Slut Life\Cuckold Husband
Does it ever end? The story is well written but for the life of me I cannot figure out how a happily married man can go from that to getting off watching his wife with two other guys. Can you spell the word VOWS? I truly fell sorry for these men who get off on this. I read in a story the other day that said fidelity is someting that spouses give to each other when they marry. When one takes that gift back the dynamic changes forever One last thing how come you never read about a wife watching her man with two other women Are women that much smarter than men?
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Anonymous03/24/12
Gold
Olympic gold for this winning story. My favorite genre is beautiful women being seduced by strangers while they reluctantly protest but enjoy it immensely. You write these type of stories well and I look forward to reading many more of them from you. My gratitude for sharing .
with a story like this to me is the wife so easily throws her husband away ,she had to know she was heading towards getting fucked and it is like no big deal...few wives fall that easily....and quite honestly even if turned on few husbands after seeing their wife kiss another man like she did would just let her wander off like that....plus the guy getting off so easily is not very realistic.This is well written but in thesr lw tales things happen too easily....with a bit more depth and realism a story like this could be 5 stars.
Your story has great potential, but an editor would help
I don't like to be a language snob, but seeing little things like "sweet" instead of "suite" just makes me lose the flow of your story as I am distracted from the story line.
On the positive side, your hotwife appears to be embarking on a great trip to new heights. Her hubby will apparently see her pussy penetrated to depths he can never reach. Sounds like a great adventure. I can't wait to hear her perspective.
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Anonymous03/24/12
Great fantasy story. Don 't be discouraged by the asshole remarks. Keep writing.
But to each his own. I think most people who like the wimpy cuckold husband stories are women. Surely telling Jenn's side would serve no purpose. This really is her side.
@ JohnTaylor You are right. I wrote a similar comment about this last year. Yes a woman sexual fantasy the wimp willing cuckold husbands with much money for meal tickets and free cheating adventures. However there are the willing cuckolds from the male people as well. The problem only the unwilling cuckolds are much more than the willing cuckolds and this woman fantasy rarly will be satisfied similar to the sexual cannibalism fantasy. I wrote several times the wimp willing cuckolds have a IMPORTANT SCAVENGER FUNCTION. He should marry more and more slut wives and with this gathering function they assist the other male people because the average husband candidates meet less percentage slut wives candidates, so the all sociaty happiness level will increase and more children will live in whole family..
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Anonymous03/25/12
You have to be shitting me
1% of the readers/commenters in LW are women; the vast majority are closet cuckolds feel ashamed about sporting wood and leave negative comments in some idiotic attempt to clear their conscience. That cuck Duna represents 50% of the comments by himself.
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Anonymous03/25/12
6-yr-old phonetic spelling
Sweet? I mean, really! And surely even US dictionaries explain the difference between 'then' and 'than'.
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Anonymous03/25/12
Dear New Author
You have to understand that several years ago, a small number of anonymous posters who were unable to satisfy their wives and had been cheated on, found the Loving Wives category and decided it was their mission to fix things. Pay them no mind, they're just angry little men who deserve out pity more than our scorn (though, in truth, I give them more scorn than pity).
That said, while your idea is interesting, you need an editor. The grammar and spelling both need help. There is a volunteer editor forum on the bulletin board, you should look into it. In the long run, it';ll make you a better writer.
Looking forward to the wife's post. What was her motivation?
I like stories in which faithful wives are skillfully seduced by snakes. This one was going fairly well (except for spelling and grammar) until the ski-bum and his bud get into the 'get her roaring drunk' tactic. Hubby is a slime-wad for not interrupting them once it is clear she's too drunk to give informed consent. No problem butting out (and even playing voyeur) if she is fairly sober and reluctantly allowing them to push her into a small gang-bang (may not have stayed that small in this episode, either)!
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Anonymous03/25/12
Sorry
But hubbie isn't stright, gave it a big 1 star.
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Anonymous03/25/12
Sad!!
The husband deserves to lose his wife. He knowingly allowed two men to get his wife drunkand take advantage of her even though he heard her protestations that she was a married woman. Had this been my wife I would have picked up the biggest object I could find and charged in there swinging. Any male who allows a woman to be taken advantage of like that is no man.
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Anonymous03/25/12
Loved It
5 stars, my thanks and please continue with these characters.
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Anonymous03/25/12
A Great story!
You wrote a good one there! You don't see great stories of wife seduction like yours much anymore. The story was just right! I can't wait for the next chapter. Send me a note to look for it.
Jim
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Anonymous03/28/12
started good but is same ole crap whimp hubby whens someone going to write where the hubby junps in and cole coks the guys with a chair or something then goes home leaveing the cheating whore at the resort, lol
the husband starts out saying he is not in favor of sharing his wife but does everything to allow it to happen. If you are into having another man or woman fuck your wife just say so. Why the dishonesty? It is like the teenage girl who gets drunk knowing that she will be "taken advanrage of" by her date. Just because someone is shy does not mean they do not know how to get fucked! Not once did she say no, in fact, she was anixous to leave her duffus husband behind to be with her studs. Now we are going to hear her side of the story? Please don't bother!
My biggest turn off is a stupid women, or a woman who pretends to be stupid. When women pretend like they don't know they are being played, I immediately know that there is no future for us. Women who like to flirt, that's all fine and dandy. If a woman, especially a married one, falls into an obvious trap, there is nothing to talk about. If a guy invites a woman out and not her husband, she is an idiot to accept. If she just met this guy and is willing to go off with this unknown person without her husband, she is an idiot. Or wants you to believe she is an idiot. I believe in forgiveness, but if you continue to play me and say that you didn't see it coming, you haven't learned your lesson.
The very first sentence in this tale has a hideous grammar error. 'Whom' is NOT a fancy way to say 'Who!'. If you HAVE to make a mistake, just use 'who' all the time, rather than using 'whom' wrong!
Trouble is, it never gets better regarding word mechanics! There are too many instances of the Bulls ignoring Sweetie's protestations. That, and use of hard-drug laced weed, suggest a strong case for rape! Certainly Reluctant & Non-Consent.
English
WIMP
what a piece of shit, shes a slut and hes a wimp, he should kick the cheating BITCH to the street
Good first Story
Please ignore the comments from idiots who post meaningless purile comments without even reading your story. More dialogue from your characters usually helps readers to get to know your characters and makes the story more intimate. Looking forward to reading your next story. Five stars.
shit
Big pile of shit
She is a gutter slut, takes nothing to get in her
Hes a WACC that is finally seeing she does not really care about him
Suite or Sweet
Were they in a suite or sweet?
Slut Life\Cuckold Husband
Does it ever end? The story is well written but for the life of me I cannot figure out how a happily married man can go from that to getting off watching his wife with two other guys. Can you spell the word VOWS? I truly fell sorry for these men who get off on this. I read in a story the other day that said fidelity is someting that spouses give to each other when they marry. When one takes that gift back the dynamic changes forever One last thing how come you never read about a wife watching her man with two other women Are women that much smarter than men?
Gold
Olympic gold for this winning story. My favorite genre is beautiful women being seduced by strangers while they reluctantly protest but enjoy it immensely. You write these type of stories well and I look forward to reading many more of them from you. My gratitude for sharing .
the problem
with a story like this to me is the wife so easily throws her husband away ,she had to know she was heading towards getting fucked and it is like no big deal...few wives fall that easily....and quite honestly even if turned on few husbands after seeing their wife kiss another man like she did would just let her wander off like that....plus the guy getting off so easily is not very realistic.This is well written but in thesr lw tales things happen too easily....with a bit more depth and realism a story like this could be 5 stars.
Puffy
What a load of unbelievable crap
Your story has great potential, but an editor would help
I don't like to be a language snob, but seeing little things like "sweet" instead of "suite" just makes me lose the flow of your story as I am distracted from the story line.
On the positive side, your hotwife appears to be embarking on a great trip to new heights. Her hubby will apparently see her pussy penetrated to depths he can never reach. Sounds like a great adventure. I can't wait to hear her perspective.
Great fantasy story. Don 't be discouraged by the asshole remarks. Keep writing.
Nm
Not My Cup of Tea
But to each his own. I think most people who like the wimpy cuckold husband stories are women. Surely telling Jenn's side would serve no purpose. This really is her side.
@ JohnTaylor You are right. I wrote a similar comment about this last year. Yes a woman sexual fantasy the wimp willing cuckold husbands with much money for meal tickets and free cheating adventures. However there are the willing cuckolds from the male people as well. The problem only the unwilling cuckolds are much more than the willing cuckolds and this woman fantasy rarly will be satisfied similar to the sexual cannibalism fantasy. I wrote several times the wimp willing cuckolds have a IMPORTANT SCAVENGER FUNCTION. He should marry more and more slut wives and with this gathering function they assist the other male people because the average husband candidates meet less percentage slut wives candidates, so the all sociaty happiness level will increase and more children will live in whole family..
You have to be shitting me
1% of the readers/commenters in LW are women; the vast majority are closet cuckolds feel ashamed about sporting wood and leave negative comments in some idiotic attempt to clear their conscience. That cuck Duna represents 50% of the comments by himself.
6-yr-old phonetic spelling
Sweet? I mean, really! And surely even US dictionaries explain the difference between 'then' and 'than'.
Dear New Author
You have to understand that several years ago, a small number of anonymous posters who were unable to satisfy their wives and had been cheated on, found the Loving Wives category and decided it was their mission to fix things. Pay them no mind, they're just angry little men who deserve out pity more than our scorn (though, in truth, I give them more scorn than pity).
That said, while your idea is interesting, you need an editor. The grammar and spelling both need help. There is a volunteer editor forum on the bulletin board, you should look into it. In the long run, it';ll make you a better writer.
Looking forward to the wife's post. What was her motivation?
Topic is a favorite
I like stories in which faithful wives are skillfully seduced by snakes. This one was going fairly well (except for spelling and grammar) until the ski-bum and his bud get into the 'get her roaring drunk' tactic. Hubby is a slime-wad for not interrupting them once it is clear she's too drunk to give informed consent. No problem butting out (and even playing voyeur) if she is fairly sober and reluctantly allowing them to push her into a small gang-bang (may not have stayed that small in this episode, either)!
Sorry
But hubbie isn't stright, gave it a big 1 star.
Sad!!
The husband deserves to lose his wife. He knowingly allowed two men to get his wife drunkand take advantage of her even though he heard her protestations that she was a married woman. Had this been my wife I would have picked up the biggest object I could find and charged in there swinging. Any male who allows a woman to be taken advantage of like that is no man.
Loved It
5 stars, my thanks and please continue with these characters.
A Great story!
You wrote a good one there! You don't see great stories of wife seduction like yours much anymore. The story was just right! I can't wait for the next chapter. Send me a note to look for it.
Jim
started good but is same ole crap whimp hubby whens someone going to write where the hubby junps in and cole coks the guys with a chair or something then goes home leaveing the cheating whore at the resort, lol
I really do not get this stories where...
the husband starts out saying he is not in favor of sharing his wife but does everything to allow it to happen. If you are into having another man or woman fuck your wife just say so. Why the dishonesty? It is like the teenage girl who gets drunk knowing that she will be "taken advanrage of" by her date. Just because someone is shy does not mean they do not know how to get fucked! Not once did she say no, in fact, she was anixous to leave her duffus husband behind to be with her studs. Now we are going to hear her side of the story? Please don't bother!
My biggest turn off is a stupid women, or a woman who pretends to be stupid. When women pretend like they don't know they are being played, I immediately know that there is no future for us. Women who like to flirt, that's all fine and dandy. If a woman, especially a married one, falls into an obvious trap, there is nothing to talk about. If a guy invites a woman out and not her husband, she is an idiot to accept. If she just met this guy and is willing to go off with this unknown person without her husband, she is an idiot. Or wants you to believe she is an idiot. I believe in forgiveness, but if you continue to play me and say that you didn't see it coming, you haven't learned your lesson.
My wife
Nice!! Would love for a couple studs to screw my wife like this.
HOT, but ...
The very first sentence in this tale has a hideous grammar error. 'Whom' is NOT a fancy way to say 'Who!'. If you HAVE to make a mistake, just use 'who' all the time, rather than using 'whom' wrong!
Trouble is, it never gets better regarding word mechanics! There are too many instances of the Bulls ignoring Sweetie's protestations. That, and use of hard-drug laced weed, suggest a strong case for rape! Certainly Reluctant & Non-Consent.
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