by Juwel_Katzchen
(and I sure hope you think that is what you've written) almost work way better in formal verse than free verse. That might make sense, I suppose. Bondage has a strong formal component to it.
Anyway, I'm blathering. Very nice, tightly composed, poem. I enjoyed it.
A pleasure to read. Added to my favourites.
Thanks for sharing this poem with us!
–AJ