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The Greatest Show on Earth

byjennaliscious©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/24/12

Greatest Story On Screen

Liscious exhibit of your literary skill, Jenna :)

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by iamafa03/24/12

Arousing

My type of story, quite interesting, nice build up...hope to see more from you Jen!

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by photoman00103/24/12

Come on over

You can use my shower anytime. Leave the door open if you like. Clothes are optional here anytime.

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by Anonymous03/24/12

Enjoyed it

Great story Jenn. Absolutely believable and told with excellent clarity and enthusiasm. Hope to see more submissions from you in the future

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by Anonymous03/24/12

Wonderful story, well written, and sexy! Please write more, especially about that group masturbation you mentioned.

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by Anonymous03/24/12

Very well written.

You have the gift of being descriptive. Nicely played to let the Guy think he was getting away with it. You're going to do well as a writer. Looking forward to your next story.

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by jennaliscious03/25/12

Thanks everybody, I'm still writing more so I hope you enjoy the others too.

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by Anonymous03/25/12

Strokeworthy

Very hot. you made me really hard. I bet you would have loved to have watched Benny stroking his hard cock. Maybe shoot his cum on your firm young titties.

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by 72slik04/02/12

Very good

Dam that was good thanks for posting. Hope you post more

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by McDaddy3401/17/13

Nice job!

Very nice you had me there, behind the curtain. Except I wouldn't have stayed there.

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