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A Firm Hand

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by Anonymous

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by ap2tech03/25/12

Nice build up

The pacing was good but is there a part two? Although I like the ending, it begs for a second chapter.

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by Anonymous03/25/12

what was the second fluid did she piss on him or was she a virgin that wasnt his real mother?

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by Anonymous03/25/12

Before I carry on...

Stop putting "whom" when you just mean "who". "Whom" isn't a posh version of "who". If you insist on using it, read up on how to use it.

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by Anonymous03/26/12

whom or who

Yep. Whom used twice - first time correctly, second time not.

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by digdaddyrich03/26/12

A little short

But very good.

The story really needs a second chapter of him domineering his mother and making her his woman.

Thanks for the read.

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by C_frommn03/26/12

Lets

Hope there are more Chapters to the Story as it was a little short and should be filled in.

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by Anonymous03/26/12

For whom the trolls toll

For all the terrible stories on this site with awful grammar and spelling giving this guy grief over misusing "whom" once is a bit laughable.

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by Anonymous03/26/12

Reminds me of a ex-gf I had

Fucked her on our second date. You want to know what did it? Believe it or not, slapping her ass caused her pussy to flow like Niagra Falls, and it turned out she had a daddy and daughter incest fetish, and actually experienced incest with her father. After learning that I used that to my advantage. Some of the best sex I ever had. I miss my little girl. Hehehe

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by dnnkink04/03/12

Hot

a hot and exciting fantasy. mommy needs a good spanking!

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by live4thebj10/08/16

Man I can relate to this story

Short version I go on this date with later I learn was an artsy geek. Face wise she was eh a little geeky artsy type which isn't my thing but a nice body. Surprisingly I liked her and we planned a 2nd date which led to her coming over just to hang. Well as I started to kiss her I got this impulse to spank her ass. After doing that she went from geek to total submissive smut like that. Since then our relationship was non stop sex hell the only thing we did outside the bedroom was the gym and the adult store to get more bondage supplies. I also introduced her to anal and she loved it.

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