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yep
i think i've found my new addiction. More!!
You are writing a nice story, but as others have said, it could use a bit of editing to make it more readable. Good plot, nice characters and we all hope that Natty's insecurities will be overcome by Evan's love and charm.
please come out with the next chapter soon!!!!!!! i love the story line sooooo much your an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!
A pleasant read, looking forward to next chapter. Natee's very insecure, as others have said, hopefully Evan will be her knight, and not the joker.
Thank you!
M1
seriously
I'm freaking out waiting for the next chapter. Please hurry!!!
Ohh I can't wait for more, I hope Evan comes through and doesn't let her down, it would be nice to see a happy ending and not just a quick screw
Nice story! Can't wait to read more :) and did they use a condom the second time? Watch her get pregnant.
Can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue writing! I REALLY like this story so far!
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