All Comments on 'Robbie and Nora'

kinda rushed, but needs further exploring

I agree; alittle rushed but a solid base now to continue. You got my interest, I hope you continue. Maybe how within a week Robbie becomes master over Nora. I hope thet this story has other chapters.But that is just a idea. It is still your story you can take it where ever you want.

So is there a sequel coming? Really short and underdeveloped, but like they say maybe some promise.

Great beginning story. Please write another Chapter where Robbie and Nora have a fun filled week. Lets see what Nora likes. Thanks.

Thanks for the read.