A lot of copying and pasting in this series. If you don't have the time to do them properly then don't write these stories at all.
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Anonymous12/01/10
What was this?
It felt like I was reading a Dick and Jane story. Cut to the chase and leave out all of the introductions for each different story. When you get the the story they are good. Thanks!
All Pregnant
Wow, All pregnant. Not that's real sex!
Thanks
Lazy Writing
A lot of copying and pasting in this series. If you don't have the time to do them properly then don't write these stories at all.
What was this?
It felt like I was reading a Dick and Jane story. Cut to the chase and leave out all of the introductions for each different story. When you get the the story they are good. Thanks!
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