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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/27/12

More please!

Nice idea, looking forward to more

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by Anonymous03/27/12

Nice start

I am interested in seeing where you take this tale.

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by AhzureDragon03/27/12

Nice hook

Can't wait for a little more :) curious to see where you take this

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by BaronScrewtape03/27/12

Great.

Another 'rape and slavery is sexay' tale from someone who probably has never known love in their lives.

Just because you put it in the Scifi section does not absolve it from belonging in the nonconcentual/reluctance cesspool.

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by MaaddMaaxx03/28/12

Interesting start

Keep up the good work. Lots of directions this could go.

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