Anger

murphy couldn´t continue...

...probably because this came close to the life he would like to have..They say, part of what we write is in our personality...if that is true, murphy...I pity you..

An unappealing story about two unappealing people.

Crash and burn on all sides

Yet another cheating slut wife with a whore monger for a husband. They certainly were unattractive characters. Of course the author bailed out and didn't put an end to this sorry tale. But I didn't care. The slut and the bastard deserve each other. A "1" for not finishing.

Guess I don't understand how he could take her back

I mean what is his reasoning? He saw her screwing another man. She's probably been with others. She may have a number of diseases. Again I ask, why didn't he divorce her? Terrible ending to this one. No stars.

Stupid

It could have gone somewhere, but as it is, it's just stupid!

REALLY ?

If he was screwing this Mary Jo why would he even consider taking his slut wife back ? unless he was a moron. divorce the slut and, get it on with Mary Jo.

Yep, 0 stars

Just awful.

Once again, disgusting characters

Who is to like in this mess? The cheating wife? The cheating husband? Their lovers that know they're fucking married people? Just plain bad.

I don't understand

These characters have all the charm of a dead animal by the side of the road. Why would anyone want to read about this? Why would anyone want to write about it? It isn't erotic, it isn't entertaining. It has no redeeming feature at all. Why? I love this category, but not this.

I GUESS PEOPLE DONT LIKE MIRRORS...

sometimes this how people truly think, to be shown a glimpse of the inner workings of a mind is a great gift, thank you murphy621, the writing is good, real good short, the story left me feeling horrible for both the characters, but also a new respect for those who have a open marriage, to each his own.

THERE SHOULDNT BE ANY STONES

in that residence of glass, TK U MLJ LV NV

If You Don't Like the Story, Don't Read It?

It always makes me laugh when someone says that. The title of the story is Anger, genius. How is one to know whether or not they like it if they don't read it?

Utterly despicable characters, particularly her. In the end, I guess he forgot that he sent her to the other bedroom to protect himself from disease. It is a certainty that the stud with the large tool is servicing a bevy of woman. These two are guaranteed to come down with either an STD or AIDS before too long. Hubby's mistress will be happy about that too. Couldn't happen to a nicer bunch.

A story should really have at least one person to like. This one failed miserably.

Please post a WARNING

I hate wasting my time on stories I HATE with a burning passion! I never would've read this sick story had the author WARNED readers like myself that I should move on... I don't like stories about swingers & cucks. Not knocking anyone but I just don't like them and I try to stay as far away from them as possible. I love authors who have the decency to post a "WARNING" to stories such as yours, that way everybody's happy, I don't go off on the author and I don't waste my time. Two nasty ass cheaters isn't my cup of tea.

Good point danger!

If only ask the stories about swinging and cheating were in one section, a section you could simply leave and stop bothering people in. It's not like there are any other categories for you to go where you won't have to throw little tantrums like a spoiled five year old in. Your only choice is to read each and every loving wives story, jack off to them like the rest of your closeted anon buddies, then their a hissy fit to make sure we all know you actually hated it.

If only

If only fronlinecaster would choke on the latest dick he was sucking, we wouldn't have to read his shit anymore. Now that would be a good fucking day! Oh, yeah, nice job there author with the 10 inch cock. What a joke.

I love when people say, if you don't like it, don't read it.

The problem with that is, as it is with this story, you don't know you don't like it until the end. Are we supposed to give high marks to something that sucked us into reading something we didn't like just because we read it? I for one don't think so.
That's why this one gets a 2 from me. It was a pretty good story until the last paragraph.

Could only give it a three, because...

In the third paragraph from the end, she says, "I didn't enjoy it at all", referring to her tryst with John. Then, referring to John, she says, "I don't think I could give up John.....he really knows how to use that magnificent 10 inch cock". Which is it? The story was really good up to that point, but an inconsistent ending always ruins an otherwise good story.

Dead marriage

Not worth the time to read. Facts are not kept straight, and they both have reached the point of no longer respecting, nor believing each other. Light the fuse, destroy the marriage, nothing else to do. Plus she is a lying cheating slut. and he is stupid, already told her she needed to see the doctor to get checked out and then he still dipped his wick, now they both can die and improve the gene pool. No sense.

Anon from 5/25/16

Anon, when she said she did not enjoy the sex, she was telling her husband a lie. Do you think she would tell him it was the best sex she ever had? Later on in the story she was relaying her true feelings about the sex being great and about being a new found size queen. There was no inconsistency.

All that being said, I dislike stories where there is no one to like. All parties in this story are worthless. The husband and wife for obvious reasons, Fay for facilitating adultery and John for fucking a married woman. Many say that someone like John should get a pass if he is not married, but the commandment is about not coveting thy neighbor's wife.

This pair deserves each other and one can only hope they don't increase the gene pool.

Regarding those who say not to read a story if you don't like it, how does that work exactly? I suppose one has to read the story to find out if they like it and therefore can then read it...

they need to each commit suicide

1*

real story

True details of serial cheating wife. Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com
College instructor in Helena Montana lost her job because of that info and a confirming photo

Divorce delayed

They should just divorce or open the marriage. Both are disgusting people.

What she said...

What she said: "I really do love the asshole"! Just for laughing! He didn't love her too! So why wait and delay the divorce? 1*

Seriously

He knows she has been putting out and now he catches her?
Good grief.
He thought his trysts were discreet but her big show was public....major difference.
In the end he keeps her anyway and....she stays with him?
Well, for her bills paid and a father in the home.
For him, open cuckold, humility and a nasty wife with NO discretion.
I'm a guy, they should divorce and SHE -is really worse than him!

You are a prey awful writer

Who writes about truly pathetic trash for people.