by GGandG
I really don't like the idea of slut shaming, be that female or male. Perhaps a better ending could have been the narrator telling Jamie what he'd just saw was so hot. Then fucking Jamie as well.
Awesome story!! Wish I were Jamie with that big cock wedged in my ass!!!!
I can even give you a line of dialog: "Wanna know if it'll feel that good with any old dick up you?'
Horrible grammar and spelling make this story much less enjoyable for me.
I was reading this today when I had a boner
Looking for something hot to read to help me while jackin off
And this was a perfect help and a turning gay story please write more
I want to know what happens next to Jamie
For someone who writes gay porn.
Maybe a bit of dialogue that didn't leave Jaime as the victim, maybe the narrator coming in Mark's shirt? Like revenge for treating a bandmate like shit while still revealing that the narrator was turned on by it and giving the reader a sexy ending.
It was hot at first but taking the verbal abuse beyond sexual gratification was a huge turn off.
Never mind the negative comments - each to his own. I thought it was super hot
Oh yeah, I thought as I read it, make him your bitchboi!.
The way I see it the sequel that makes the most sense is one wherein the rest of the band finds out about young Jaime getting turned out so he reluctantly becomes the bands own bitch as well as the post show entertainment for whatever frat house they play at. Not a day will go by without Jaime reluctantly taking multiple cocks. Ultimately the band replaces him on base but keep him around for entertainment purposes, especially pulling trains after the shows.
I love this story. I tried to give it 5 stars but something was up with the site and it registered only 2.
How about a sequel that reveals Jamie was targeted by the senior house members when 2 of them walk into the room and congratulate Mike with turning yet another straight kid gay. They haul Jamie to his knees and order him to duck them off, tears streaming down his face. He's forced to choke down their cum and they tell him that he's going to help them initiate their new pledge class, all 18 of them. They pick him up and carry him sobbing into another room. His band mate walks over to peak in and sees Jamie bent over a table getting butt fucked by one guy after another, all while he begs them to stop. Mike sees the peaking bandmate and notions for him to come into the room. Mike then tells the bandmate to give it a try, he pulls his pants down and proceeds to ass rape Jamie too. The first asks the other band members to stay for an extra night, they oblige and of course Jamie is forced to entertain cock after cock. He passes out from exhaustion but continues to get reamed until his hole cant close anymore.
I liked the story but I kept expecting his band mate to join in some way.
now he's a slave to black dick. three guys in him at one sounds about right